Date: July 31, 2006 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
The characterizations here are sooo good. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks ;)
10 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2006 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
noooooo way. i'm going to have to ask you to add another chapter. and by that i mean, kill melissa.
Author's Response: Kill Melissa...good theory ; )
8 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2006 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ack, no! Melissa? Melissa? No, no, no.
(By which I mean, great job! Write more soon!)
Author's Response: Oh um...sorry about that ;)
10 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2006 11:50 am Title: Chapter 2
Fic where Jim comes back to Scranton from the Stamford branch is like crack to me. Season 3, already! I'm enjoying this a lot. Lots of little touches that make it great. I like the Michael characterization - it's fun to have fic where the Jam is the, er, filling if you will, har har, to the whole office environment and all of the supporting cast.
Author's Response: Haha, good one! Thanks for the feedback.
10 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2006 06:03 am Title: Chapter 2
aww...poor pam. i can just see the writers pulling a scenario just like this on us.
Author's Response: Yeah, I'd be a little sad to actually see this played out.
10 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2006 04:26 am Title: Chapter 2
WOW - that is so believable; you nailed every single character perfectly (TWSS)! Really love the subtlety here as well - as everyone else said, I can really envision that being an episode next season.... Loved it!
Author's Response: Hehe...TWSS. Great. Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2006 03:57 am Title: Chapter 2
Ooh...I'm not too sure I like this new Melissa chick...continue!
Author's Response: Who WOULD like the girl that comes between JAM? Thanks for the feedback.
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, you do such a great job with the dialogue. Please continue! But also, it's personnel, not personal :)
Author's Response: Thank you darling! Sometimes no matter how many times you check, you still leave a mistake. It's fixed now ; )
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just had to tell you before I read it, but I read your summary and I could not stop laughing! I'm assuming it was Michael! Oh, that was brilliant with the whole "mommy that comes down from New York every now and then.” Ok, I'm gonna actually read it now.
Author's Response: Haha, aw thank you!
8 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
The image of Pam looking up and seeing Jim at the doorway of the breakroom with his bag slung over his shoulder...omg. I think I melted. Poor Pam.
Author's Response: You too? I was a pool of liquid on the ground as I was writing it.
Date: July 30, 2006 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is fantastic--feels so true to the characters and to the show. and even though it makes me feel for pam, i'm actually excited for melissa to give her a little kick in the ass :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
I literally felt nauseous from the point that Melissa showed up until the end. My heart is breaking for Pam. I kind of want to cry.
You know what this means don't you? It means that you're awesome. You have their characters down. Perfectly. More, please.
Author's Response: Thank you. Hopefully you'll feel a little better later on.
Date: July 30, 2006 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is an awesome story, but if my reaction to Melissa (see hatred, seething) is any indication of how I'm going to handle Season 3? It's not going to be pretty. You have all the characters voices perfect!
Author's Response: Heh, imagine how I feel writing her. Every keystroke breaks my heart!
Date: July 30, 2006 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
You did a great job of capturing the whole gamut of characters...and I only hope that reading this toughens me up for what I think we can expect next season. Melissa must be stopped.
Author's Response: I agree. Thank you for the feedback ; )
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
Please tell me this will get better? At least you are preparing us for what looks like season 3.
Author's Response: Happy endings are my specialty...maybe.
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm having visions of what season 3 might bring us... That is a very good story, even if poor Pam is being tortured!
Author's Response: It's her turn, right?
9 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
"She’s sick of solitaire." That says it all, eh? And I love that the first thing she hears Jim say is "Ah." Kind of inadvertently sexy. Melissa made my stomach flop, too. Poor Pam. Season 3 might be hard :( On a brighter note, I love that Creed thinks the stapler is a game and I wonder if he thinks Ryan started it?
Author's Response: Thanks. I think Jim is very good at being inadvertently sexy : )
Date: July 30, 2006 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I feel that you are really preparing me for the inevitable. Damn, this is going to be really hard to watch in season 3. Can you torture us a little more with Jim/Melissa and then the huge Pam/Jim payoff? ha ha
Author's Response: We'll see... ; )
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
Holy crap, I both love and hate you for this. This story is fantastic.
Author's Response: People love and hate me a lot. Thank you.
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
No Melissa taking Jim's hand. NO, NO, NO!!! Sorry, I was channeling my toddler. I am loving this story! You have got the characters down so well. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Don't worry, Melissa makes me want to throw a tantrum too. Thank you.
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh no! My stomach just did a sickening flop too.
Author's Response: Mine too! Thanks for the feedback!
8 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesome ensemble piece with Jammy tension. I wonder what happens next? *goes to find out*
8 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, so sad. And funny. And....wow. I love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh no!! Poor Pam. I guess it's about time she realized what it's like but...ouch.
Write more. Pretty please?
Author's Response: Yeah, ouch. But it's her turn!
9 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2006 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback!