10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 8
Holy crap that is some good stuff. I love this story. I'm a sucker for an angsty story, but have my fingers crossed for a happy ending for Pam and Jim.
Please keep up the great work!
Date: August 02, 2006 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh no! Another broken heart-to-be added to the mix. This is sooo good! Please hurry with chapter 9.
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow again... It's so sad and so... Please update again ! I check every 2 minutes like a maniac ;)
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 8
You've got to be kidding me!!!! Come on, let's see some JAM. I love the story, if you couldn't tell.
Date: August 02, 2006 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 7
What heartbreakingly awesome chapter. I don't think it's over the top at all. I can see how that would slip out when she had been drinking, I think you're doing a great job and I can't wait to read more.
Date: August 02, 2006 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 7
Holy Mother of God! That was so...real and good and just about killed me. Please tell us the next chapter will be up soon!
Date: August 02, 2006 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
This is seriously good - with a mini cliffhanger in every chapter. Please keep it coming!
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh. My. God.
Just rip my heart out and dance on it why don't you!
Date: August 02, 2006 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
No, no, no. Not too soap opera-ish at all. Just full of pain!
Date: August 02, 2006 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please tell me you're posting the next chapter NOW! You can't leave us hanging like that!!!!!
Author's Response: So it was okay? Not too soap opera-ish? BTW, i'm workng on the next one now....
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 11:50 am Title: Chapter 7
And chapter 8?
Author's Response: I'm working on it! WHat'd you think of the last one? Was it too over the top?
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 10:51 am Title: Chapter 6
When can we expect chapter 7?!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: It's up! And I'll warn you - I got myself all upset writing it! :o)
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 10:11 am Title: Chapter 6
YAY for another update! I love the way your builing and weaving together all of the different relationship dynamics here--Jim & Pam, Jim & Andi, Andi & Pam, and Pam & Roy. It's cleary getting complicated and messy, but the way you're writing it feels real and true to the characters.
I am definitely hurting for Andi now, though. Hope you manage to find a way to work things out that's not too painful for her!
Date: August 02, 2006 09:47 am Title: Chapter 1
This is excellent. You've sort of made Jim into Pam - now he's the one who's trying to convince himself he's happy with the one he's got rather than the one he wants! Thanks for the quick updates!
Author's Response: Wow, I actually hadn't thought of that! Thank you - that's very profound! :o) Thanks for the feedback, too!
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 09:19 am Title: Chapter 6
Gah, this is so amazing and perfect and wonderful... I can't even explain it fully. You have their characters down perfectly, and it's just so... good.
I think that every time you write about Ryan, I start laughing hysterically. Because it's true, he always looks uncomfortable or mortified. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have to giggle, too, at the Ryan stuff, because I swear, as well as John Krasinski can do angst, B.J. Novak can slink around looking more mortified than I've ever seen anyone look in my life, and it KILLS. :o) Thanks for the review!! I'm working on the next chapter now -- it's the Dundies again!
Date: August 02, 2006 09:14 am Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter. I just love this story although parts are difficult to read. I hope the happy ending is on the horizon, although I guess it won't be a happy one for Andi.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I'm getting to the happy ending (I think). And yeah, it won't be too happy for Andi. Not sure what I'll do with her when all is said and done. Maybe give her a puppy and send her on her way.
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 09:11 am Title: Chapter 6
I am so in love with this story. It's sooo good and I'm starting to feel a little sorry for Andi, but not so much that I don't want a JAM ending!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! Keep it coming --
8 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 08:33 am Title: Chapter 5
Jim bit his lip to keep from springing out of his chair and yelling, in a manner worthy of Michael Scott, “Okay, okay! That’s enough with the girl talk! Off you go, back to your desk — hey, why don’t you make friends with Kelly! That’d be a swell idea!”
This line cracked me up. I really like how things are going so far and I'm curious to see what happens next.
Author's Response: I enjoyed writing that one. It just occurred to me that Jim would probably be about to jump out of his skin at the thought of the two of them whispering about Roy. :o) Thanks for the feedback!
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 06:21 am Title: Chapter 5
Still loving this story :) I think that the way you've written this is completely believable--Pam & Andi would like each other because they probably have a lot in common seeing as how Jim likes both of them. I think it's also makes total sense that Jim wouldn't say anything because he wouldn't want to hurt anyone or cause awkwardness--especially since he's been keeping quiet already for 3 years :)
I can totally see Season 3 playing out this way--and I love it! Thanks for the frequent updates :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments - really! Keep them coming! :o)
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 05:52 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh, Pam. "A lot in common" with Andi, indeed. Their dynamic is totally believable, I almost feel bad about loving their interactions so much because I know that it's going to change once they figure out the truth.
I don't think you have to worry about this not working. Firstly, Jim keeping quiet works because that's how he seemed to go about things before. All of this works, it's amazing.
And in case you haven't noticed, a lot of the humor on the show is sort of mean. The whole interaction with Jim watching Andi and Pam talk about Roy had me laughing out loud.
Keep these fantastic updates coming. I change my mind now, I do still want Pam and Jim together but I feel TERRIBLE for Andi. Hopefully she doesn't love Jim too much.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that thoughtful review - -really! It didn't really occur to me until I was writing that maybe that's where some of the humor could be, but I wasn't sure if I was stretching it. Thanks so much!
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 12:29 am Title: Chapter 4
I feel awful for saying this, but I love Andi. I'm almost sort of hoping for a happy ending for her and Jim. Is that terrible of me to say?
God, it's going to be awful for Jim to be around two girls who he cares for, and completely in the middle. I can't wait! (Hee.)
Author's Response: I'm happy that you like her, because that's what I'm going for! (Although I myself am starting to dislike her just because she's in the damn way.) :o) Thanks for the feedback!
10 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2006 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
i am loving this story! i actually have no problem with jim & another girl--i like andi and like the way that you've written about them together because you've made their relationship make sense. love the way you wrote the conversation between them about what happened with pam. and i'm really curious to see what happens when they get back to scranton...
10 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2006 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is the most angsty stuff! I still hate her and think she's evil! But you are a genius and your writing is amazing so I trust you that the angst will subside into something a little happier. If not, I still love your angst and as I am your number one fan (I hope that's not getting creepy, yet) I will remain committed to your story no matter what.
10 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2006 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hey, it's me - your number one fan, remember? Anyway, I haven't actually finished reading the page but I just needed to say "She's EVIL!" Ok, back to reading.
10 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2006 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. Looking forward to more.