10 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2006 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Email Surveillance: Part II"
This was sweet torture! Reading your work brings me back to when my partner & I first got together - ahh memory lane. Thank you for capturing that moment so well (the one where electricity, tension and passion between a couple is so palpable). Kills me every time.
Author's Response: Ohhh....thank you so much!! :o)
10 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2006 11:49 am Title: Chapter 14: The Fire
I love this series. I liked how everything she was self conscious about were the things he loved about her. Well done!
10 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2006 12:15 am Title: Chapter 12: "Email Surveillance: Part II"
Oh my God...this chapter hit me hard. I can't even describe the range of emotions I just went through. This was so beautifully tragic and the Snow Patrol songs were absolutely perfect. Wow...I'm still in awe!
Date: August 19, 2006 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 13: Valentine's Day
Aww, this was so sweet! What a thoughtful thing Jim did.
Date: August 19, 2006 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 15: Office Olympics
The ending make me ache for them.
Date: August 19, 2006 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Fire
Poor Katy, yes, but poor Pam as well, comparing herself to Katy and finding she falls short, when in reality all Jim wants is her...
Date: August 19, 2006 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 13: Valentine's Day
That was just so sweet. Loved Pam's email at the end.
9 [Report This]Date: August 19, 2006 09:50 am Title: Chapter 15: Office Olympics
Ah, very nice ending! I also loved the Valentine's Day installment. These two are so sweet.
10 [Report This]Date: August 19, 2006 06:59 am Title: Chapter 15: Office Olympics
Eee! Sugary sweetness, indeed! Oh my god, so fucking amazing the whole way through. I was aching at the beginning, and just floating by the end. I adore this. I do.
Author's Response:
Yay!!!!
Date: August 19, 2006 06:50 am Title: Chapter 14: The Fire
Wonderful, again. I've never hated Katy. She always seemed sweet, and I felt horrible for her on the Booze Cruise, losing Jim and in such a cruel way. Even though she was sort of an obstacle, I never hated her. I'm glad that you showed another side to her that wasn't bitchy. Nice work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love it that you are so great about giving me immediate feedback! :o)
Date: August 19, 2006 06:36 am Title: Chapter 13: Valentine's Day
SO. CUTE. Also, I can't tell you how awesome it is to wake up to new chapters from you. It's like christmas!
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Email Surveillance: Part II"
I love your writing, I love your music taste.
KEEP WRITING OR ELSE I'll DIE
Author's Response: haha! Thanks -- and I discovered Snow Patrol via Jim/Pam videos on youtube -- there's one for each of the songs in this chapter. Sigh.
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Email Surveillance: Part II"
Killing me! Seriously...I'm off to buy those songs on iTunes! Glad you didn't have to work today!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! By the way, if you go to youtube, there are Jim/Pam videos to both songs -- "Chasing Cars" and "You Could Be Happy." They are both excellent, very well-done. :o)
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 11: "Email Surveillance: part 1"
Wow....and the description of the hands--so true!!! This had me flashing back to my own experiences when you find yourself suddenly alone with someone you are NEVER alone with (but always wanted to be....) Does that make sense? Who cares? Off to read Part 2!!
Author's Response:
Well come on -- how could we not give love to the hands! :o)
Thanks, as always, for the feedback!
Date: August 18, 2006 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Email Surveillance: Part II"
Wow...it would be great if Pam could acknowledge her feelings sooner, but it makes me a little mad to see her acknowledge that the feelings exist and not do anything about it.
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Email Surveillance: Part II"
It was beautifully sad and kind of hopeless, yeah... I hurt so much for Jim, and for Pam, yeah... it was so frustrating and upsetting and angsty, yeah...but... I'm pretty sure that when I read the line 'she haunted him' and all the air left my body in one great whoosh and then that one steady stream of tear began, and for the next ten minutes while I read to the end would not ebb for even a moment...yeah, I'm pretty sure it was the throat-crushing intensity that did that. Yeah. You f***ing Goddess.
Author's Response: WOW - loved your review. Thank you so much!
Date: August 18, 2006 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Email Surveillance: Part II"
I'm actually all chocked up. You wrote their despair and sadness so beautifully.
Date: August 18, 2006 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 11: "Email Surveillance: part 1"
Ok, Jim's chest hair? Thanks so much for throwing that in...such a sexy image!
Date: August 18, 2006 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 10: "Booze Cruise"
I know I write this a lot, but Jim is such a gentleman. Always putting Pam's needs before his own. I can't even imagine how much it must have cost him to go get Roy.
Author's Response: God, I know. Sometimes the sheer goodness of that character makes me want to sit in a corner and cry. :o)
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Email Surveillance: Part II"
wow. this one broke me a bit. and that album is perfect for the mood you create...and for jim & pam in general.
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Email Surveillance: Part II"
Dear God... are you trying to kill me? That was beautiful. So in character and so heartbreaking.
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Email Surveillance: Part II"
That was incredibly intense. So well written (just like the whole series).
Date: August 18, 2006 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Email Surveillance: Part II"
Ugh. Once again, you mix the sexy and the heartbreaking expertly. I loved your preface. I love him too, even if it's totally silly to adore a fictional character with everything in you. Your stories are so wonderful. Thank you, for the 100th time.
Date: August 18, 2006 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Email Surveillance: Part II"
This is torture. Exquisite torture.
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Email Surveillance: Part II"
oh my gosh. that was so ... sad and perfect and i thought i was going to die.
such an amazing job.