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I adore this story. I LOVE everyone's AU jobs and relationships to one another. Most importantly, though, I appreciate how even though they are "new" characters, they still have a shadow of what made us love them, like Jim being a gentleman and Pam being slightly un-courageous.

Anyway, can't wait for more, more more!

Well unless Pam was doing something that you are very much not including in the story, she is not a prostitute. I think you should update with very, very long chapters every hour on the hour. Just my opinion but I think it would be shared by others.

Author's Response: Haha, I don't think that I can write fast enough for every hour, but it makes me happy to know that people anticipate my next update that much! :D Have no fear, the next chapter will be up before too long.

aww I like this story its real cute. hehee. and Im from the city so its an extra bonus.

No, it doesn't come off like Pam's a prostitute.  Jim's just a bit flush with cash, so he spreads it around a bit.  There are definitely people like that around!

I like how Jim came to the kitchen to ask Pam to the party, and wrote out the directions and all...  Hmmm... he didn't ask Dwight or Angela or Kelly to the party...

I'm enjoying this. 

I'm smiling like a really creepy person right now. I heart this story so much.

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Wow, this is my favorite chapter too!  I love that you made Jim really successful but didn't really change his personality.  I can't wait for your next update!! 

Yay! Jim is the tallest businessman.

Is the small petite blonde supposed to be Angela? That's probably a dumb question...I'm guessing yes. If it's no, then I'm dumb anyway so I guess it doesn't really matter. I like this way of Pam and Jim meeting. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!

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Ok, this is quickly becoming a favorite of mine!  I love the way you wrote Dwight....you did such a good job of showing how he really is sweet.  Of course I can't wait to see what comes next...you left this at such a good little cliffhanger!

I am glad that chapters are long... I printed out while I was getting my hair done and the time just flew by.

On to the story... I liked how Pam is starting to come into her all by herself and I especially like the conversation she had w/ her mom and the support she gets from her.  You captured the acceptance letter scene great. 

I am looking forwward to more and I will be reading the next chapter tonight.

Side note: I too live in area where the jobs suck and I am currently way over qualified for my job!  

oo screw my suggestion...I like advertising! hehe

I'm interested to see where you are going to go with this fic, I'm looking to see where you add Jim into this. As for possible jobs...a brooker on wall street? I got an image of Michael making an a$$ out of himself by playing with the bell. But I'm looking forward to see what you decide.

This is just wonderful.  And no apologies for chapter lengths!  You don't want to add a bunch of filler just to make it longer, and this is perfect to finish off this little scene.  So... Apology not... accepted. Because it wasn't even necessary in the first place.  (/Andy)

Swanky galas... Actually, they don't have to have high paying jobs to take them to fundraising galas.  They can work for the agencies trying to raise money via the galas.  So they put on the galas, put on their fancy suits for the occasion, and mingle and raise money.  

Alternatively, they could work for a NY firm which gives out money to various worthy charities for tax breaks and such, and they can be in the department that determines who's worthy.  Maybe they also fund the arts, and struggling new artists.  Maybe they set them up in cool little lofts.