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Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2007 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very cute.  I liked it a lot!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Rose Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2006 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Adorable, and the last line is simply hilarious. Well done!


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 28, 2006 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love happy stories of the future

Author's Response: Me too! Thanks for reading (and reviewing!).

Reviewer: Missparker85 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2006 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

go see her. you're both being idiots.

hahahahaha. love. 



Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2006 09:06 am Title: Chapter 1

I love Pam's mom. Simply love. And this story twas lovely. :)

Author's Response: I love her, too! Thanks for reviewing, glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2006 07:54 am Title: Chapter 1

I love the idea of Pam's mom wanting Jim to go to Pam...great fic!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Mel60 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2006 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is my favorite of yours, so far. I was just absolutely charmed by this story. Very adorable.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: lano Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2006 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Simple and perfect, this is how it should play out. Great characterizations!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2006 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is officially the most adorable thing ever. Perfect.

Author's Response: Aw, you're going to make me blush! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2006 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is beyond sweet. Loved the last line. Really touching.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2006 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Beneath that, in neat, elegant cursive, it said, " Go see her. You're both being idiots."

Hee. That was so sweet. I love Mrs. Beesly.

Author's Response: Thanks! I think it really sounds like something she would do.

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2006 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awww, YAY Mrs. Beesly! This was adorable. Loved the last line :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: dunny Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2006 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Pam's mother is my FAVORITE. I loved this, nice job!

Author's Response: Yup, she's great! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2006 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Jim is caught in the moment, remembering that day, how she looked, how it had seemed like she was trying not to skip down the aisle.

What a sweet image of Pam! Nice!


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2006 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yea for Mrs. Beesley! I love Jim reminiscing about Pam walking down the aisle on their wedding day. Oh to be loved like that!

Author's Response: I love seeing Jim on their wedding day. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2006 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is adorable. Or a car. Hee.

Beautiful job of bringing Mama Beesly to life.

Author's Response: Thanks! I think we need to see more of her.

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