Date: June 08, 2007 07:30 am Title: Chapter 3
See, now, I don't blame Jim for being jealous. Mohinder is a pretty, pretty man. I love where this is going!
Date: June 07, 2007 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
Noooo! Pam should have called up a little fire in her palm and showed Jim! Or pulled Jim into the apartment and introduced him to Mohinder. The way you wrote it...is just like they wrote on The Office all season. Hey...are you an actual Office writer?
I'm only teasing. It's lovely. I really enjoyed Mohinder's "save the receptionist" line, and how he and Pam had a little Jim/Pam kind of moment with the leaning forward. Hmm... Pohinder? Pamhinder? Mohindam?
I look forward to seeing some of these special abilities!
Date: June 07, 2007 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oooh! Excellent. You know, when something supernatural happens to you, you really need to talk to someone about it. Someone...Jim-like. Yeah.
I love the small ball of fire.
Date: June 07, 2007 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really do not like Jim right now, why would he just jump to such stupid conclusions about Mohinder. Anyway I am glad that Pam is not going to plead with him to see reason and that she is going to New York. I really like this story a lot. Can't wait to see Pam interact with the other Heroes characters.
Date: June 07, 2007 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
In typical Jim/Pam fashion, their problems and misunderstandings are magnified and blown out of proportion by their inability to just *talk* to one another... so frustrating. (But I'm kind of shipping Mohinder/Pam right now!) ;)
Date: June 05, 2007 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
i like it. and i love mohinder so that rocked!
Author's Response: oh my god mohinder. i love that man. him and jim in the same story, well, thats like a dream come true for me.
Date: June 05, 2007 09:55 am Title: Chapter 2
There are no words to describe how excited I am by this fic. The two best shows on NBC (or TV altogether) combined? Win! Looking forward to seeing how Pam learns to deal with and control her powers!
Date: June 05, 2007 04:30 am Title: Chapter 2
Aside from how wonderfully clever this is, I love your writing style. It's very clean, very direct. I'm enjoying this very much!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: June 04, 2007 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, two of my favorite shows. I love the interplay here, and I think it easily could have gone this way if Jim had confronted Pam instead of asking her out. Does Pam have what's-his-name's toaster-melting ability? That's awesome. Can't wait to see what's in Chapter 2!
Date: June 04, 2007 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
i like it so far. i am really intrested to see where it goes since this is the very first office cross over fic i've read and its an cross with heroes.
Date: June 04, 2007 03:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice beginning! I look forward to reading more.
Date: June 04, 2007 12:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Cool story, love the premise. I like that Pam stood up for her actions against Jim. I am really interested to see what happens next with Pam's power.
Date: June 03, 2007 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting! I hope she doesn't become a bomb and blow up Scranton. Is there anyone to fly her out of there? Interesting. And, if your next question for me is... "Are you on the list" of people waiting for the next chapter, the answer is yes, I am on that list.
Date: June 03, 2007 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dun-dun-dun! Can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder what power Dwight has...