Date: June 14, 2007 06:09 am Title: Tuesday
It's shame we didn't get to the sex part before I scared him away. Too funny. At least we know Pam's thinking about sex with Jim so that can only lead to good things. Possibly in the next chapter?
Caretaker Jim. Love him. Everyone should have one. Except Karen. She should go away.
Date: June 14, 2007 06:03 am Title: Monday
Things took a particular turn for the awkward when Karen arrived This phrase tickles me for some reason. Or maybe I'm just psyched that Karen realizes it's time to go?! And aw, they're sharing an iPod account - next thing you know they'll be picking out china patterns! *fingers crossed*
Next!
Date: June 14, 2007 05:56 am Title: Friday
"My objection is that you are already spoken for."
Awesome! Acknowledgement of the relationship. And fluff. That's all I want. Not so much to ask, is it? OK, off to the next chapter!
Date: June 13, 2007 08:24 pm Title: Thursday
Great final chapter Mox. Love their IM convo - Jim trying to convince Pam to cut right to the chase that night was too funny. Senor Chicken, indeed (don't think I didn't catch the ref there, you she-devil.) Totally fun X 5!
Date: June 13, 2007 08:18 pm Title: Friday
I truly adored this story. I think instant message and chat fics are your calling. But really, I love all your stuff, so maybe it's just Jam that's your true calling. ;)
9 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 08:05 pm Title: Thursday
I am going to sleep so well with this healthy dose of fluff! Awesome as per usual.
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 07:54 pm Title: Thursday
“The best night ever? Hmm....” she couldn't remember the last time she saw Jim so animated, and she couldn't help but keep teasing him. “Does that mean the best in terms of all that ever came before, or the best it's ever going to get?” That was the funniest line ever! I can't wait to see a couple-y Jim and Pam in S4. This was a great story. Thanks.
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 07:42 pm Title: Tuesday
Jim's note with his drawing of the stick man holding flowers was "adorakable". (My favorite new word.)
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 07:39 pm Title: Monday
Karen knocking Jim in the head with the box when she left was hilarious - and a perfectly passive-aggressive thing for her to do. And how sweet was it that Jim gave Pam his ipod.
10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 07:33 pm Title: Thursday
Happy sigh.
Sorry, I really do try to give more detailed feedback when I review stories I enjoy this much, but right now I'm just stuck in a happy place, where Jim and Pam are flirting all day over IM and being silly together during a ridiculous Dunder-Mifflin event. I think Disney got it wrong: this is the happiest place on earth.
Great job, seriously.
Date: June 13, 2007 07:33 pm Title: Thursday
Oh squee....*blows kisses to Moxie*
Thank you, thank you for the fluffiness.
Ok, now get back to work. You're only 3 weeks behind...Just kidding!!
Jim is back...yay!
9 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 07:32 pm Title: Thursday
YEAH!! Jim's back! Really enjoyed the natural playfulness of this chapter and the story in general. Thanks
10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 07:29 pm Title: Thursday
I really love this story. You managed to make it funny and sexy. Great job!
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 07:28 pm Title: Friday
I just loved "adorkable" - such a cute term! And Jim bringing in a new bag of jelly beans because he woke up with a craving for sweets he hadn't had in a while. And Jim's list was so precious, especially "He squeezed her hand again. "My objection is that you are already spoken for." True bliss.
Date: June 13, 2007 07:20 pm Title: Thursday
Ha! I feel like you should start a whole new fic based on the last chapter! Twas fun!
Date: June 10, 2007 12:24 pm Title: Wednesday
Oooh baby! Options open indeed!!! Can't wait for the next!
Date: June 10, 2007 12:17 pm Title: Tuesday
::sigh:: he is DREAMY
Date: June 10, 2007 12:08 pm Title: Monday
Ok, aside from this being gooey goodness, I also love it because it shows how this could really go down on the show. I mean obviously we're not going to get to see Pam and Jim go on dates a whole lot...but I like what you've done here in terms of what we COULD get to see in the office, and I love that. Just little things like him getting her away from Michael, rubbing her back, TALKING about a date...LOVE THIS.
Date: June 10, 2007 12:00 pm Title: Friday
Oh I just started reading this and already I'm in love. "Spoken for" LOVE-IT!
Date: June 10, 2007 10:36 am Title: Wednesday
SQUEE! Three cheers for tonight!
Date: June 10, 2007 10:32 am Title: Tuesday
Sweetest chapter in the world? Absolutely, it is.
9 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2007 10:26 am Title: Monday
First it's a shared iTunes account, then it's marriage. That is the natural progression. So they're basically engaged right now. Woo! ;)
Date: June 10, 2007 10:22 am Title: Friday
Hooray for "already spoken for"!!!
10 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2007 02:28 am Title: Wednesday
and i'm in tears. and laughing. how do you do it, mox?
Date: June 09, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Wednesday
Fave lines:
" I want to talk to you. I like talking to you. Talking to you isn't a chore. Talking to you has never been hard.”
That reminds me of his similar remark to Roy on the show.
That was a sweet way of dealing with that particularly painful moment for Pam. I really hope we get a few of these in season four, where a painful episode from the past is somehow brought up, acknowledged between them, and then quickly put behind them without too much angst. I would be surprised if everything was totally hunky-dory with all the misunderstandings and missed cues just swept under the rug. But who knows? We'll see in September.
Looking foward to number five, Moxie.