Date: June 07, 2007 01:58 pm Title: Pam, 2007-
Deeeelightful, Ms. Once!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this one!
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 01:49 pm Title: Pam, 2007-
Great conclusion. This was a terrific story.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope we get to see Jim actually go after a relationship wholeheartedly next season...it would be an interesting change of pace....
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 01:44 pm Title: Karen, 2006-2007
Spot on characterization of Karen. Great job.
8 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 01:41 pm Title: Katy, 2005-2006
Wow. More than I ever needed to know about Katy.
9 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 01:35 pm Title: Stephanie, 2000
Wow, who doesn't hate Stephanie?
BTW, the way you wrote her reminds me of Carla Gallo in 40 Yr Old Virgin
Author's Response:
Wow, who doesn't hate Stephanie?
Ah, a question that has yet to be answered. She is a bit of a bitch, isn't she?
9 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 01:30 pm Title: Kirsten, 1996-1999
Nice start. Kirsten sucks.
Date: June 07, 2007 12:25 pm Title: Pam, 2007-
Ah, young Jim, there are so many things I'd like to tell you (how to put on a condom, e.g.) yet sadly I cannot.
This is so sweet and funny - and absolutely, he is SO not That Guy. Thank god Pam loves his true inner-dork. So do I. Just great.
Author's Response:
I know that you don't want to TELL Jim how to put on a condom. I know you want to SHOW him how to do it.
Thanks for the review!
Date: June 07, 2007 12:25 pm Title: Kirsten, 1996-1999
on my husband's and my first date (after months of build up) we didn't make it out of his place for 3 hours (of making out) because when it's the right person there is no 'right time' or 'the rules' it's just right. Sigh, best 5 things EVER!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Oh, and, just so you know.....Angela would find you to be TOTALLY "whorish" for your face sucking ways. I, however, am not Angela. So, I just respect the smoochage. Way to go. She shoots, she scores!
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 12:15 pm Title: Pam, 2007-
::thunderous applause:: that was the best five things ever. And when he bought the flowers I automatically thought, "he's gonna get his shirt all dirty." I was right.
tee hee. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews! I really enjoyed writing this one...I really "felt" it, you know? I'm glad you liked reading it!
Date: June 07, 2007 12:09 pm Title: Katy, 2005-2006
especially when he spent all day at work feeling like the receptionist wore his balls on a string. - that had me cracking up for like a minute, I literally saw Pam with testacles on a necklace over her cardigan...haha oh my god
katy and me need a wake up call...do you have any idea how much Brazillians cost?? about $60 every few weeks...for realsies. I wish the boys in high school were more like Jim, I'd have a lot more money right about now.
Date: June 07, 2007 12:06 pm Title: Stephanie, 2000
oh my god poor baby!! this is so embarassing, and sweet...I wanna give Jim a hug!
Date: June 07, 2007 12:04 pm Title: Kirsten, 1996-1999
I will spare you how old I was in '97. But I will tell you that this story is incredibly intriguing and adorable...off to read the rest!
Date: June 07, 2007 11:17 am Title: Karen, 2006-2007
i really love this chapter. the capital names for their titles: That Guy, Awesome Girlfriend, Real Jim... great touch. i think you described his turmoil perfectly, and i can see Karen being That Girl that has those expectations :)
i like the whole fic a lot, but this chapter's great.
Author's Response: Thanks, I tried to keep the canon ladies as in character as possible, and I particularly feel pretty good about the Karen chapter....
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 11:11 am Title: Pam, 2007-
What a bunch of bee-yotches! My favorite part was his arriving at Pam's at 6:59 but not knocking until 7:04. I had a roommate that did this. 7:04 also preferrable to 7:05 because then it would look like you waited until 7:05.
Date: June 07, 2007 10:50 am Title: Pam, 2007-
Oh, so nice! And hooray for a date-date. And why do I enjoy so much the idea of Jim's nice white shirt all stained with flower pollen? I think he'd be adorkable.
This is lovely!
Did you get my e-mails? I sent you an email and then re-sent. Answer, so I'll know if I have to look further. Also, awaiting Bad!Grammar!Fic (Grammar Cracked - Sweet?) at your convenience.
Date: June 07, 2007 10:43 am Title: Karen, 2006-2007
Ha! I really like this one. The beginning and ending sentences bookend it really nicely as well.
Date: June 07, 2007 10:41 am Title: Pam, 2007-
It's PAM's TURN!!!!!
So, this is trying to show how Jim Halpert is the perfect man, right? Because those first lines... makes me remember why I love him.
This was the perfect messed up date in the history of bad messed up dates. Because it is Jim and Pam and it is so hard for those two to not be perfect.
:D
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 10:40 am Title: Pam, 2007-
I love this. Really really love it. :)
Date: June 07, 2007 10:40 am Title: Katy, 2005-2006
Ewwww! Katy, yuck! Well, no wonder Jim "hadn't talked to her for a while" at his E-mail Surveillance party. He was holding out on her till her hair grew back! That is just gross.
Date: June 07, 2007 10:38 am Title: Karen, 2006-2007
She expected to be taken out on “real dates,” and hanging out with the TV and some takeout didn't qualify
Nope, sorry, Karen, that is my idea of a perfect date. Okay, maybe every once in a while, I want the guy to splurge on Arby's or subway. But as long as we are back for TV :). 'Decent' resturants are just icky. Overpriced and not so great. Actually, I think about the fanciest resturant I go to is Chili's. And that is maybe once a year.
Karen needs a guy who isn't Jim. And now she is free to find him.
Date: June 07, 2007 10:37 am Title: Stephanie, 2000
Poor Jim. Rude, rude Stephanie.
Date: June 07, 2007 10:36 am Title: Kirsten, 1996-1999
Kirsten - I bet she's sorry now.
Date: June 07, 2007 10:35 am Title: Stephanie, 2000
So, I hear Stephanie, I think of my neighbor. I hear curly blue eyes, I think of another nieghbor (a 8 year old)... it is an odd combination.
Yeah, so at this point, I realize its moderate sexual content which is way more than i usually read, so, um, I am still going to read it... But, I may skim it... just, fyi.
But, stepahnie sucks also. Having never been in that position (well, definitly not Jim's position since I am female), I can't actually imagine, but yep, that sure seems like one of the worst things to have happen.
Date: June 07, 2007 10:31 am Title: Kirsten, 1996-1999
Haha. Wanna feel older? In 1996, I was still in elementary school. I was 10-11. I am a youngin!!
Also, in my rush to read this, I actually banged my head in the wall. I was laying down and then I wanted to move, and bam head right into wall. This happens often... maybe that is why I am the way I am.
Poor Jim... see, that is the reason why everyone things good guys finish last. Nope. I want a good guy. Kristen sucks.
Date: June 07, 2007 10:31 am Title: Pam, 2007-
Dork=Love. You know you're with the right person when you can be your true dorky self around them.