Date: June 26, 2007 05:59 pm Title: By the DVD section, past the Playstation/Xbox Display...
Bwahahahahaha.
Ahem.
Bwahaha.
8 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2007 05:13 pm Title: By the DVD section, past the Playstation/Xbox Display...
"The woman who was once their boss doing unspeakable acts in her bedroom with her husband...who was still their boss." I never saw the picture switch coming...too funny! After this I bet Jan invests in her own photo printer!
10 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2007 07:13 am Title: By the DVD section, past the Playstation/Xbox Display...
Too, too funny! Oh, to be a fly on the wall when Jim and Pam open those photos.... :-)
9 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2007 06:08 am Title: By the DVD section, past the Playstation/Xbox Display...
I think this has been my favorite chapter so far. Work it, Jan!
Date: June 25, 2007 11:59 pm Title: By the DVD section, past the Playstation/Xbox Display...
That was just hilarious. I was laughing out loud at the end. If I wasn't enjoying the chapter so much, I might have caught on before the end. Great job.
Date: June 25, 2007 11:33 pm Title: By the DVD section, past the Playstation/Xbox Display...
Haha. So perfectly Jan. And I just love the Jan/Jim relationship; you've written it perfectly here. And made Michael and Jan happy in their strange way. Well done!
Date: June 25, 2007 10:44 pm Title: By the DVD section, past the Playstation/Xbox Display...
Freaky Jan. OMFG. This sounds totally like her.
Date: June 25, 2007 09:40 pm Title: By the DVD section, past the Playstation/Xbox Display...
Heh. I have a feeling that Jim and Pam will stop at the first "compromising position". Actually I hope he sees them and recognizes the mistake before she looks at them, lest not both parents be scarred for life.
Date: June 22, 2007 08:54 pm Title: Plastic cups, plates, forks, spoons...and oh dear, knives....
Hee! You used the word 'inseminate'!! This series is really great. I adore married Pam & Jim, working through married people stuff.
Date: June 22, 2007 08:35 pm Title: Plastic cups, plates, forks, spoons...and oh dear, knives....
Aww. What a nice ending. Jim saying it could take many many tries reminds me of a bit from The Alliance: "But listen, I'm going to have to talk to her a lot. All right? And there may be chatting, and giggling."
Up until the end, I thought maybe Pam was already pregnant, and that's why she was: a) moody, and b) so upset about his reaction!
I laughed out loud when she said he didn't want to have another baby with her! Pam, you couldn't be more wrong!
I'm glad there will be some more!
Date: June 21, 2007 08:29 pm Title: Plastic cups, plates, forks, spoons...and oh dear, knives....
This was so great: Pam turned and planted on the phoniest and biggest smile she could muster. "Karen! Hey! How are you?"
I love how women can do that. We'll be absolutely pissed, but if we run into someone or the phone rings it's instant big fake smile. Amazing.
I love this series!
8 [Report This]Date: June 21, 2007 03:12 pm Title: Plastic cups, plates, forks, spoons...and oh dear, knives....
"Tension level down, heart rate back to normal, collision and impending catfight avoided." Great line! I loved that Jim helped keep the conversation where Pam felt comfortable. How awkward to run into her when they were fighting!
Date: June 21, 2007 12:47 pm Title: Plastic cups, plates, forks, spoons...and oh dear, knives....
this story is just so cute :)
Date: June 21, 2007 07:34 am Title: Bread Aisle
I love this story sooo much. Each chapter is incredible. I hope they run into many, many more people.
Date: June 21, 2007 06:27 am Title: Plastic cups, plates, forks, spoons...and oh dear, knives....
Yayy! You updated. I'm a really big fan of this fic. I love it, so well written and you've done a really good job of capturing all the character. This was such a good fight, very well written and so believable. I can't wait to read more!
Date: June 21, 2007 03:51 am Title: Plastic cups, plates, forks, spoons...and oh dear, knives....
Oh, this was great. I love Karen in this, slightly surprised at how far they've come so soon, but not bitter at all, and moving on healthily in her own life - awesome.
Date: June 20, 2007 10:35 pm Title: Plastic cups, plates, forks, spoons...and oh dear, knives....
That was really nice. I love your characterization of Karen. Good job!
Date: June 11, 2007 09:11 pm Title: Clean Up, Aisle 10, I repeat....Clean Up, Aisle 10....
These are all really great so far - you've done a great job of showing how these little supposedly insignificant meetings can turn into something more meaningful - with Katy and Roy just getting a look at their past and the relationships/lives that got away from them, and Ryan and Meredith actually learning from these moments and maybe making something better of themselves in the future. Great stuff!
8 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2007 07:22 pm Title: Clean Up, Aisle 10, I repeat....Clean Up, Aisle 10....
I just love that this story shows what an awesome dad Jim is -and what a wonderful marriage they have, and what great advice that Jim gives.
Date: June 11, 2007 12:11 pm Title: Somewhere between the toothpaste, the hemmoroid cream, and EPT tests
Way to mix it up with Ryan's POV. Keeps us on our toes :) I love how you portray Jim in this story and in your others. Very good!
Date: June 11, 2007 11:44 am Title: Clean Up, Aisle 10, I repeat....Clean Up, Aisle 10....
I had to come re-review to say: don't even think that your "Office Space" reference got by me, because it didn't. Hey, how much 'flair' are you wearing today?
Date: June 11, 2007 09:05 am Title: Clean Up, Aisle 10, I repeat....Clean Up, Aisle 10....
I just read your response to my review, and I wanted to let you know that I am totally okay with the similar wavelengths.
I think that's why I'm enjoying your story so much.
Super Wal-Mart is a great breeding ground for stories, but I absolutely hate going there. :)
Besides I would say that our stories aren't all that similar, just the setting and the running into people. Mine are just meant to be silly, absurd even, but I feel like yours strike a more serious, heartfelt chord.
I love this and can't wait to read the fifth installment.
And your story has made me want to finish mine. :)
Date: June 11, 2007 12:15 am Title: Clean Up, Aisle 10, I repeat....Clean Up, Aisle 10....
Nice! I really like the T-shirt and the conversation with Pam!
It's nice you had him meet up with Meredith; I feel like she had "screen time"!
Date: June 11, 2007 12:07 am Title: Somewhere between the toothpaste, the hemmoroid cream, and EPT tests
Good chapter!
I was confused very briefly; I wasn't expecting a Ryan POV! But it was great to see Ryan's thoughts, particularly about Kelly.
Jim in his PJs was a fun image; I've been in Jim's "must buy kiddie medicine" state - no fun. I liked Pam's call to Jim also and Jim saying of course he knew where to find it!
I like that Kelly's going to get flowers, but I also thought Ryan's "she'll just have to wait" thoughts were pretty amusing.
Fun story.
Date: June 10, 2007 10:50 pm Title: Clean Up, Aisle 10, I repeat....Clean Up, Aisle 10....
Oh, Meredith. It's probably good she passed out right away or she might've molested Jim. ;)