Date: June 12, 2007 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG! OMG! Holy smokes, you should definitely continue! I almost missed this, but wow! Great idea and I am enjoying what you have written so far. Cannot WAIT to see how it plays out.
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the very enthusiastic review! I'm glad you liked what I have so far.
Date: June 12, 2007 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great concept...so clever that my first thought was, how come no one's done this before? Pam's slow realization as she wakes up that something's not quite right really comes across. Looking forward to seeing what's next.
Author's Response: Thanks! I really thought someone would have done this sooner, too, but I'm glad I get to be the one to do it!
10 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can imagine that this would be hard to write. Trying to keep it realistic and not too far out there. I think that you should keep going. I haven't seen The Family Man, but I think that this is good so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks. And you should check out that movie. It's cute.
Author's Response:
Thanks. And you should check out that movie. It's cute.
Date: June 12, 2007 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, what an amazing start! I really love the concept, and your incredible attention to detail. I'm anxious to read what happens nex, please update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. I really like the concept, too. I was sort of hoping someone else would write it so I could just read it and not have to do any of the work. Haha. I'll get the next part up soon.
Date: June 12, 2007 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a fun idea! I look forward to more of this story.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: June 12, 2007 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG! Keep it up! If you need a beta look no further than: Rachel.N.Lewis@gmail.com :)
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'll keep that in mind. Thanks for the review!
9 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like it! I also really love the movie The Family Man. :) I'm interested in seeing where it goes!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I like that movie, too, but I haven't seen it in a while. Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liiiiike! Nice concept; I like to see this done well. Get the next part up soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm working on the next part.
Date: June 12, 2007 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I'm hooked. :) New chapter please. Right now. :)
Author's Response: Haha. You're going to have to wait a little bit. It's not even typed up yet (I always write everything out on paper first). But I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: June 12, 2007 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Holy crap. I am so intrigued. You MUST keep going!!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks. :)