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Reviewer: nopointsforpants Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2009 05:21 am Title: In the beginning...

I just joined this site and found this little doozy. I know you posted it AGES ago but I have to tell you I loved it. You are my first review, coz I just had to tell you how great I thought it was! You actually had me giggling at my screen like a fool quite a few times and not many stories can do that to me. I was giggling and then getting emotional, a damn good read. Thanks!!! :)

Author's Response: That is so sweet!  I'm so happy you liked it and thank you so much for taking the time to tell me so.   I really do appreciate it!

Reviewer: naomi_dylan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 08:56 pm Title: Sweet Dreams

I loved the hotel scene ridiculous amounts.  I want Jim to be mad at ME like that...


Author's Response: That was my favorite part of the story gotta tell you.  LOL!! You and me both.  Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2006 11:17 pm Title: Revelations

I know I read this once before ~ can't believe I forgot to post a review.  ANYHOW... I defy anyone to read this and then tell me that Pam & Jim are not MFEO. 

Maybe I am a little overly sentimental because I am 7 months pregnant right now and my first was delivered via an emergency c-section (everything turned out fine, but it was sheer terror for a little while), but this is so unbelieveably sweet.  Everything that is important in life is wrapped up in this story.  And this last chapter literally brought tears to my eyes.  Just. Wow.



Author's Response:

Awww.  Thanks lisahoo!!!  It's always a treat for me when someone leaves a review for a story I wrote months ago. 

I'm a sentimental mess on a regular basis.  I'm truly frightened to find out what I'll be like when I have kids. 

Thanks again for the review.  I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2006 12:02 am Title: What's in a name?

Dude, this is going down as one of my all time faves. First of all...Jim thinking her stomach is THAT amusing is spot-on! I could totally see him balancing cups on it! lol. And then just "Gracie" ::sigh:: I love it.

Author's Response: Awww!  Thank you so much.  That makes me smile - much as your fic has.    And I have a soft spot for the name Gracie so I made them use it.  LOL!  I'm so very glad you liked it!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2006 11:52 pm Title: Sweet Dreams

::sigh:: Just stumbled upon this one xoxoxo...I love it. Her locking him out of their hotel room was PRICELESS and then this scene at the end was just so touching. I could just FEEL her confusion upon waking up and knowing that something was different.

Author's Response: It's so weird what can inspire you.  And I thought while I wrote this that it was getting a bit soap opera sappy so I tried to balance it with bits like the one in the hotel room.  I'm glad you thought it worked!!  Thank you!!

Reviewer: dolcianiblows Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2006 12:21 am Title: What's in a name?

OK, seriously, you have got to be one of -- if not the number one -- best JAM writers here. Your stories always have me giggling and smiling. Everyone's so in character! It's crazy!

Author's Response: You're much too kind.  Thanks so much!!!  I'm glad you enjoy what I'm writing.  If I can make even one person feel that way it's all I ask!!

Reviewer: dolcianiblows Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2006 12:05 am Title: Sweet Dreams

Oh my God, that hotel room scene could very possibly be the cutest, most in character piece of Jim/Pam work I have ever read.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!  It was really fun to write.  I see them as both being playful when they finally get together.  I'm so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2006 05:30 am Title: Revelations

Awww, that was so sweet.  And very true to the show, I think.

Author's Response: Thanks Lissa!  I'm glad you thought so.

Reviewer: mixedberries Anonymous 6 [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2006 10:06 am Title: Revelations

What a lovely job! I loved all the flashbacks to earlier in their relationship. Adorable!

Author's Response: :)  Thanks mixedberries!!!  I'm glad you liked it!!!

Reviewer: lano Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 10:19 pm Title: Revelations

Wow, what a beautiful ending! 

"He knows now that it had never been a matter of why or how." - I sure hope the show's writers know this :)



Author's Response:

Thanks lano!  I'm glad you thought so.

PS:  How could they not see what is plain to the rest of us???  C'mon.  They totally have to. :)

Reviewer: shannanagin Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 09:49 pm Title: Revelations

This fic left me with a great big smile on my face. So, so wonderful. You continue to amaze me.

The image of Jim with a baby just makes my heart go all pitter-patter. And the scene at the hotel room when Jim got locked out in the sheet was just one of the most in-character, adorabley sweet and funny Jim/Pam moments I've ever read.

Those are just some of the highlights but I loved the entire fic. Good job!



Author's Response:

Thanks shannanagin!  You've amazed me on various occassions so we're totally even.  I'm sooo glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Pixel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 08:24 pm Title: Revelations

Oh yay!  I love the way it ends up, and love that they sing Motown  You're so good at doing a whole life picture with them.

Author's Response:

Let's hope it's rubbed off on the writers a bit. 

HA!  It was either Motown or Celine Dion.  My niece loves her album of baby songs.  I just thought Celine's a tad too ambitious.  LOL!  Thanks Pixel!

Reviewer: bossofdancing Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 07:51 pm Title: Revelations

This was SO beautiful....thank you so much for writing such an amazing story. :)

Author's Response: Thank you bossofdancing.  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: kelly518 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 05:35 pm Title: Revelations

Okay, I'm crying again.  Just the picture of Jim with his girls is too too much.  Man is that guy going to be an awesome father.  Okay, I gotta stop before I start crygin again.  Thank you for sharing this awesome story, I can't wait for the next one!!!!!!

Author's Response:

It's the sweetest image I can think of - I guess it will be until I have kids of my own.  LOL!  You are most welcome.  I'm so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 05:10 pm Title: Revelations

Just darling, xoxoxo!


Author's Response: Thanks LL!  I'm glad you think so!

Reviewer: Boof Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 05:04 pm Title: Revelations

very cute.  And nice working the title in there...full circle as JK would say!  Well done--sorry to see this series end--though I know you've always got more stories at the ready!



Author's Response:

Thanks Boof!!   I really appreciate all your reviews.   They make me smile. :)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 04:58 pm Title: Revelations

Awwww.  This was so sweet.  I really don't think you stepped into cheesy territory at all.  It was just very heartfelt.  Jim loves his girls and that is alright with me.

Author's Response:

Alrighty then.  No cheese.  Good to know.  It's that interview about the babies casting.  I can't get it out of my mind.  This does not bode well for me keeping Pam from getting knocked up in my fics I'll have you know.  LOL!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 04:33 pm Title: Revelations

Beautiful story. Really, that's all that can be said.

Author's Response:

I cannot ask for more.  Thank you!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 04:26 pm Title: Revelations

I think you've done well in coming full-circle here, with Jim answering the question he posed to himself in chapter 1. Let's hope it really is just a matter of when!



Author's Response: OK.  GOod.  That was my intention.  I'm just a touch neurotic so the validation is an essential part of my treatment. :)  So thanks!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 04:19 pm Title: Revelations

Choking. Back. Tears.  Heaven help me, woman, this about killed me. So beautiful.

Author's Response:

Please don't die.  Who's going to read my stories then??? 

Thank you.  I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: tizzy Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 04:16 pm Title: What's in a name?

awww yes I love that Grace's middle name is Beesly, don't mean to brag but that's what my parents did with me, and aww, this fic just makes me say awww.... :-)

Author's Response:

tizzy - I couldn't think of a name I really liked - and when I have kids I'm definitely using my mom's maiden name as one of theirs (first or middle - can't decide) so I decided they should too. :)

Oh and nothing wrong with Awww. ;)

Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 02:49 pm Title: What's in a name?

I can't stop grinning. Loved this chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad!!!!!!!!!  Thanks Smurfette!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 12:04 pm Title: What's in a name?

Awww.  What a lovely family. :)


Author's Response: Aren't they adorable?  I can't even take it myself.

Reviewer: Linds20 Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 11:46 am Title: What's in a name?

That's it, a man this perfect cannot exist in reality. What a great fanfic!!!

Author's Response: Oh Linds.  I can't imagine how he could.  But we can dream.  Thank you!!!

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 11:39 am Title: What's in a name?

Awwww!!!  So, so sweet! 


Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so. :)

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