Reviews For For what I am when I am with you...
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 
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Date: June 15, 2007 05:52 am Title: Burn and beat
10 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2007 05:52 am Title: Burn and beat
Wow, this was even better the second time around. I've always felt that there was such potential for movement after Boys and Girls, when it was laid bare to Pam who supported her dreams and who didn't. I think the way you depict Pam abruptly leaving is very believable, and the image of Jim picking up his keys and seeing Pam on his doorstep is so powerful. And the phrasing..."his mind was heavy with reliving the day," for one, and many others. Cannot wait for more.
Reviewer: malcolm lake Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2007 02:40 am Title: Burn and beat
Author's Response: thanks always love a review that says they're in character! ;-)
Date: June 15, 2007 02:40 am Title: Burn and beat
Really liked this, especially Pam finally standing up for herself with Roy. Also, how neither Jim nor Pam felt safe even talking about what was going on afterwards-very in character
Author's Response: thanks always love a review that says they're in character! ;-)
Reviewer: tessa mae Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2007 10:09 pm Title: Burn and beat
Date: June 14, 2007 10:09 pm Title: Burn and beat
Oh, that was lovely! Looking forward for what's to come... :)
Author's Response: thanks!!