Date: June 20, 2007 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1
This is great, but I feel awful reading it. Jim's adorkable optmism as the beginning, knowing it was just going to hit him in the gut...you describe that build-up of the tension, and the hit in the gut, perfectly. Can't wait for the next installment!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I know, it is heartbreaking to write too! But it makes the happier times that much sweeter, don't you think?
Date: June 17, 2007 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed that. Now I have to go and read about Pam's First Day. As for poor Jim, at least we know better days are ahead for him and Pam. Can't wait to read about his other dates
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're gonna go back and read my other story. I referenced it a lot in this one, so I hope it will be an enjoyable read for you.
Date: June 17, 2007 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
When you really stop to think about how much rejection Jim went through to get Pam...it's pretty damn sad. Good thing they're meant to be ;)
I love that part about the sticky tack at the end...that's exactly how I thought that he did that prank!
I liked the story of yours that leads into this one, and am excited to read the next one!
Author's Response: I know, poor Jim!
Thanks for the review. I'm getting to work on the Katy date.
Date: June 17, 2007 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was really, really good - I'm looking forward to the chapter on Katy.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Date: June 17, 2007 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice! You did a really good job with Pam's awkwardness on how to tell Jim about Roy. Poor Jim! And how awkward - you, me, and my fiancé!
I like your detail about the sticky tack on the nickels - you've clearly thought about that nickel trick.
Nice job! I look forward to the Katy chapter. I think Katy was pretty into Jim, as evidenced by the fact she went to the Booze Cruise with him even though he hadn't talked to her for a while at E-mail Surveillance.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad I was able to get Pam's thoughts across...it was hard because I was really trying to stick with just Jim's point of view, so I couldn't cheat and just say "Pam felt awkward." : )
I agree - Katy really liked Jim, because when you think about it, who wouldn't?