Date: June 21, 2007 05:18 am Title: Times She Could Have Known
Oh, this was lovely. I love missing moment stories, and it was great to be inside of Jim's head. Very nice!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I know, aren't missing moment stories the best?!
8 [Report This]Date: June 19, 2007 05:09 am Title: Times She Could Have Known
This really captures those poignant S2 moments, when I think we all felt that, on some level, she had to know. The depth of Jim's feelings and his vulnerability comes through the writing so well. And I like how you ended each part with the refrain of her having to know - it creates a great rhythm. Really nicely written.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad the repeating line came off as rhythmical and not redundant. And I definately agree...sometimes she just had to know.
Date: June 19, 2007 12:37 am Title: Times She Could Have Known
This is your first story? Seriously? It was fantastic! SO in character, so very moving. I loved it. You should definitely write more as the muse allows. :D
Author's Response: Thanks! I have a feeling I'll be writing some more over the agonizing summer hiatus... :o)
Date: June 18, 2007 09:41 pm Title: Times She Could Have Known
You hope it wasn't that bad? Goodness, it was beautiful! All those special JAM moments we all love and watch over and over..thanks for putting them all together in this story.
Author's Response: Thank you and your very welcome! It was hard to choose just a few JAM moments when there's at least one great one in each episode, but I loved writing it.
Date: June 18, 2007 09:37 pm Title: Times She Could Have Known
That was sweet and beautiful -- you brought a little something extra to those scenes we've all seen before and someone else wrote. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thank you muchly!
Date: June 18, 2007 09:10 pm Title: Times She Could Have Known
You hope it wasn't that bad? It was excellent!! Really, really, nice.
How did you capture Jim in so few words? Wow.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really glad you guys are liking it...I was kinda nervous to submit it.
Date: June 18, 2007 08:31 am Title: Times She Could Have Known
Such a great story, I loved how you reflect on those.
I tink my favorite line: That everything he did was all for Pam.
I really agree that there are plenty of times, if Pam had just looked, really looked, she could have known. I think probably she wasn't wanting to look, didn't want to admit it to herself that Jim had feelings for her and that she had feelings for him.
I love that scene from casino night
great ending also.
Author's Response: Thanks! I totally agree. There were times (many more than I mentioned) that Pam just had to know. The only explanation is that she was consciously ignoring it, even if its the thing she wanted most.
Date: June 17, 2007 11:05 pm Title: Times She Could Have Known
very cute! i like it :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: June 17, 2007 10:33 pm Title: Times She Could Have Known
Aw, I like this idea. It's interesting to explore those quick moments right after the cut in those scenes. And how much Jim thought he was expressing versus what was actually on his face and what Pam could read (or let herself read) into it. I especially like that during Jim's confession on CN that he kind of looks at her like, "come on, you had to have known".
Author's Response: Thanks! That's where I got the idea. I just thought of all the moments when watching the episodes where I thought Jim's love was obvious. If only Pam noticed/acknowledged it!