1 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2019 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice job Jim. And good work Pam. Always glad to read when they actually manage to get past those blocks on their tongues...nice little anticipatory AUs.
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2006 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oohh, the ice thing was so hot.
10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2006 09:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh good Lord. Jim and ice and a husky voice? I'm dead. Great job!!!
7 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2006 04:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Ah Michael! As inappropriate as always. I thought you were able to portray him well.
Cute story. Two tiny things... I think you meant Meredith, and not Margaret, when you were talking about cocktails. She is certainly the resident boozer! Hee.
I'm also a bit curious how Jim got hold of ice all of a sudden. Were they in the break room at that point? I couldn't quite figure it out...
Author's Response:
*facepalm*
Believe it or not, I did have it checked over. I also wrote it on an airplane on an overnight flight. Thanks for pointing out the mistake! As for Jim/Pam, I imagined they were still in the lunch room after everyone else had left. Sorry if it wasn't clear. I'll definitely make sure to keep this in mind if I ever write again. Thanks for the review.
10 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2006 12:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Adorable. And hot.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
5 [Report This]Date: August 08, 2006 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank heavens for ice cubes and supply closets! Cute story, I loved the ending.
Author's Response: I don't even know if the supply closet is real, but I'm thankful there's the possibility of the supply closet. :) Thanks for the review. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: August 08, 2006 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Very cute.
Author's Response: Thanks.
7 [Report This]Date: August 08, 2006 11:28 am Title: Chapter 1
So funny. I loved Michael's awkward un-PC comments to Stanley and Oscar. As well as sexy - the ice cube, enough said!
Author's Response: I didn't like Michael much s1, but I enjoy him now. He's so clueless. Glad I was able to bring that across, and I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.