1 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2019 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
It did get a little abrupt towards the end, but not too much. And the lead up was so good it didn't matter. I love the interpolating of IM and regular narrative.
10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2008 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved it. I hope you write more like it :)
Date: June 25, 2007 09:19 am Title: Chapter 1
ah, how i wish this was how the merger happened. would have saved a lot of heartbreak for those two.
Date: June 24, 2007 09:48 am Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. Perfect reworking of the ep (and added good stuff afterwards) with original events.
I just love that Pam wore matching underwear and then told Jim and was embarrassed. And when he ignored the IMs, so perfect because I think he would have done that that day. But with a little persistence from Pam he gave in. And eventually got what he wanted. Nice work!
Date: June 23, 2007 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
haha! I thought it was very clever and very cute! The part about the "sore vagina" made me laugh really hard...reminded me of an episode of scrubs where Elliot says she's going to need a "vaginaplasty" hehehehe
Date: June 23, 2007 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor Karen. :(
Date: June 23, 2007 05:26 am Title: Chapter 1
loved it! i'm glad pam didn't let the matter drop @ the office, even if she did resort to im dor strength---great job
Date: June 23, 2007 12:15 am Title: Chapter 1
This was fabulous. The Merger is one of the saddest episodes if you ask me. Like way worse than Casino Night...all the shooting down and...ugh
you have completely redeemed it for me. If only it happened this soon...if only.
great job! :)
Author's Response: The Merger is the episode with the most promise, I think, only to end with Jim & Pam in a far worse position than they started. I'm glad you liked my take :)
Date: June 22, 2007 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was cute! I enjoyed it a lot.... but i can't believe you made Pam say "sore vagina" OMG LOL I cringed, but now i'm laughing haha
Author's Response:
What's fanfic if not filled with cringe-worthy moments? Pam's half-asleep there anyway; she's not totally sure of what she's saying ;-)