Date: June 26, 2007 07:49 am Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night
You've captured their tones very well, there was just the right combination of smut and fun, and I look forward to the rest!
It made me smile even more when I remembered knowing someone whose code for sex was 'having donuts'
Author's Response: Glad you thought the tone was right...that's great to hear. And that's too funny - who knew donuts were the universal code? Thanks, McGigi!
10 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2007 07:01 am Title: Donuts
You know, the only thing you needed to make this perfect was...
oh wait, my mistake: it IS perfect. So lovely and sweet and sexy and full of a little thing called LOVE. :-)
Yay!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks, Mox. These are just silly things, but I felt like writing something simple and angst-free. Sometimes you've just gotta go there. Yay back at you!
10 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2007 06:28 am Title: Donuts
Is it hot in here? *fans self* Well now, that's my idea of a very good Sunday morning indeed! But all the sexy time is nothing without that deep all-consuming love between them that makes it just utterly scorching hot. Nice job - now I'm useless and spent for the rest of the day. But what a way to go!
Author's Response: So happy you said that because, much though I like writing the heat, it really is about the luuuurve connection. And yeah, that Pam is one lucky girl...what with the big donuts and such. Sorry to render you useless. Will try to do it again soon. Thanks for being such a great enabler...oops, I mean reader, Ms. Questionizer!
Date: June 26, 2007 06:19 am Title: Donuts
A very good day, indeed. You just about killed me(in the best possible way, of course). So thrilled to see something new from you, and looking forward to more. These first two have left me satisfied and smiling:)
Author's Response: Happy to hear it's working for you, LOL. Will try to provide more S&S by tomorrow. I hope you don't mind if it involves more scantily clad Jim? Thanks, as always, bitterpill!
Date: June 26, 2007 06:13 am Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night
Nice ending and that's how you create a crazy, sexy, hot loving mood without an anatomy lesson. You are the master and I bow before you! Must go check on this talk of donuts now...
Author's Response: I figured you already knew where all the moving parts were. Crazy hot loving sexy? If all that came across, I'm thrilled. I'm just a simple girl, but there really is nothing sexier than love, is there? Thanks for reviewing, you!!!
9 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2007 05:59 am Title: Donuts
This is a very good story! Um I think I heard the timer beep. Better get that next chapter out of the oven before it burns. Nobody likes burnt chapter. Great job!
Author's Response: Not quite baked yet...but, promise, I won't let it stay in long enough to burn. Glad you liked it...and thanks!
9 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2007 03:57 am Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night
Adore, adore ADORE!!! But you already knew that. :) I'd have to quote nearly everything in each chapter to tell you what I loved about it - so let's just say I can't wait for the next installment. Oh and my birthday's in September - if - you know - you wanted to plan a sequel.
Just sayin'. ;)
Author's Response: September, huh? Your 22nd, right? (I am evil.) Thanks again, you, for nudging me away from smutter's remorse. Here's a hint about the next installment: it involves a boy and his underpants. (Yes, you heard me correctly. This is deep stuff, missy!)
Date: June 26, 2007 03:05 am Title: Donuts
There should be a warning not to read this before you head to work. Seriously. Now I'm all red, giddy and late for work. Thanks a lot. But dang, freaking awesome story. So very good... just like an oversized jelly donut (did I just say that...???!!) ;-)
Author's Response: Nothing like a giant jelly donut (and sadly, yes...I just said that!) Sorry about messing you up for work...but so glad you're enjoying. Thanks much, StarryDreamer!
Date: June 25, 2007 11:50 pm Title: Donuts
'Thought you were going to break my fingers there for a minute.'
'Thought you were going to break my brain there for a minute.'
PERFECT. This was just the perfect blend of delicious domesticity with a bit of smut. Indeed smuff - thank you so much. I hope you are not nearly finished with these vignettes.
Author's Response: I like that - domestic smut. There are still at least a couple of these bits in the works...have to see how long I can maintain this smuffy mood. Trying to avoid angstville these days! Thanks for being such a great reader/reviewer, LoveFool.
10 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2007 11:45 pm Title: Donuts
Okay I will never understand why a man shaving is so damn sexy, but it is. Wow it is.
She couldn’t look away from Jim.
Boy ain't that the truth. I love your list of things she looks at in him--observant artist that she is. :)
the dissipating steam around them, like a big cloud of him
He’d sigh in his sleep. It was a good sound to hear in the dark.
Yes. This is the kind of detail I love, the kind you get from long association with a lover, the little things that make what would ordinarily be the most banal act in the world sensual and memorable.
And then of course you abandon the little details and pull out all the stops:
he was doing that thing with his tongue that was five kinds of wonderful
a little drunk with the power of literally having him in the palm of her hand
‘Make me come,’ he finally whispered,
equal parts goofy, adoring and deadly sexy
Merciful God. I believe I have lost the ability to walk.
One teen-einsy little correction:
And still they lied there
Should be
And still they lay there.
Beyond that, it's all fantastic. Going in my Favorites file, as usual. I think I need to start a file cabinet with your name on it.
Author's Response: Actually, this whole thing started when I promised lisahoo a smutty shaving fic (am I deep, or what?) Have to admit, that one line (yup, that's the one) kind of undoes me too. And - thanks for picking up that glitch - lay/lie always do me in. Thanks again, NEJ.
Date: June 25, 2007 11:38 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night
Colette!!!! I was so so happy to see something from you and even happier after I read it. Just my kind of smuff. Although my roommates are out of town and now I'm feeling a bit pissed that I don't have a Jim of my own to come over and distract me from things that go bump in the night......so unfair.
Anyway, good stuff! Moving on to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Seriously. Where is that boy (and his booty) when you need him? Glad this smuffy thing is working for you. Thanks so much, LoveFool.
10 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2007 11:34 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night
Oh this is so adorable. And hot. And sexy and full of the love and laughter that is Jam. Le sigh of happiness.
But wait! There's more? .... O happiness!
Author's Response: Glad you liked this silly thing, NEJ. And of course there's more - no real plots, just more smuff. Thanks for indulging me!
Date: June 25, 2007 10:29 pm Title: Donuts
lisahoo's birthday and we all get the present. Niiiice.
I love all of it, but this part in particular is just... Neat.
Almost before she knew what was happening, her leg was flung over his shoulder, her panties hanging from her ankle,
Who doesn't like a good jelly donut, indeed. Damn...
Author's Response: 'Neat' is one way of putting it, LOL. I owed Ms. Hoo a bit o'smut...and had this vision of jelly donuts. This is what ensued. Thanks, Susan M!
Date: June 25, 2007 09:51 pm Title: Donuts
You just have a way with words, my dear. You can bring on the steam with so few well-chosen words. Well done as always! :)
Author's Response: I'm cyber blushing. What can I say - that boy could cause global warming...not too many words are required! Thanks so much, MA - as always! (And hooray for the ribbon! Much appreciated.)
Date: June 25, 2007 09:47 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night
All of the booty talk is hilarious...excellent banter madame. This is oddly reminescent of a little story that Kelly told about Ryan which makes it extra funny to me for some reason :)
Author's Response: Phew. Nothing worse than banter that falls flat. But - what story is that? Do you remember which episode? Thanks, secondrink!
Date: June 25, 2007 09:11 pm Title: Donuts
Mmmmm... donuts and sex. A perfect combo!
Author's Response: Well, add Jim to that list and I think it may acheive the perfect trifecta. Thanks so much, Elizabeth Lynn. More soon!
Date: June 25, 2007 08:55 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night
Okay - so I saw that you posted a new fic and I was so excited that I got a hot cup of tea and some cookies to have while I read - just like I do with a good book. Because your stories always leave me satisfied and smiling! This one was no exception. Thank you!
Author's Response: That is so sweet! And tea and cookies sounds pretty good about now. Glad you enjoyed and thanks much, kells8995!
Date: June 25, 2007 08:45 pm Title: Donuts
OH.MY.GOD.
Three glasses of wine...waiting for LtW premiere photos. Found this b-day present for lisahoo..and THIS is her present???
‘Make me come,’ he finally whispered, simply and clearly, in her ear.
*EverybodyHurts falls off sofa and dies from the hotness*
Thanks colette for that. Yeah...
Author's Response: Happy to hear that line, uh, spoke to you, EverybodyHurts. Not too much then? LOL. Somehow, I could hear Jim saying that, in that moment (or, okay, in my dreams.) Thanks so much!
Date: June 25, 2007 08:39 pm Title: Donuts
Booty Wake-Up Call. (Sorry, couldn't resist.) Thank you soo much Miss Colette. I (almost) don't mind getting older if this is the payoff.
Now I am going to have very nice dreams and think of Jim in a towel.
Author's Response: Did you not request Shaving!Jim? I am a woman of my word, Ms. Hoo. I wish you many years of dreaming of Jim in a towel. Or less. Thanks, you!
Date: June 25, 2007 08:28 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night
Yay for booty call! Jim does bring some good booty.
Author's Response: Yup...that is one bootilicious boy. So happy you agree...more in your b'day goodie bag soon!
Date: June 25, 2007 08:27 pm Title: Donuts
Oh my, Colette.
Cold shower definitely required after THAT!
Author's Response: If you require a cold shower, my work here is done (okay, not quite.) Thanks so much, Stilla.
10 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2007 08:15 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night
OMG. It's too freaking late at night for me to be reading something this...this...feel good. I'm sitting here all giddy with this enormous grin. Love the banter here -- Jim accusing her of making a booty call is just perfect. ...As is the rest of it. Just love this, absolutely love it.
You just keep adding, and we'll keep reading, believe me.
Author's Response: Who wouldn't want a booty call from that boy? Glad this amused you...and thanks for reviewing so quickly, girl7!! Love that. Stay tuned - more trifles on the way. (No more donuts, however.)