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Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2007 07:46 pm Title: Come out to play....the future lies with you

Nice little call out to LtW, you tricky thing. Tickle His Pickle - hee (but wait, was that dill or bread and butter?) Like that Pam's sustained her fascination with the Kama Sutra - and how kind of Jim to be willing to assist in her studies! Despite their communication issues, they seem to do fine in Dork, not to mention the language of pickles. And don't think I didn't catch the boxer brief ref there too - you never miss a thing, Moxie. Totally fun, as usual.

Author's Response: Obviously, colette - it would be Polish Dill!!  *badda-bing!*  And ever since your latest, you have ruined me for anything but Jim in black boxer briefs.  I don't know whether to thank you or curse you.  ;-)  Thanks for the support and the review!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2007 07:33 pm Title: Come out to play....the future lies with you

Yup, Jim was "getting into Pam's stuff" alright!

Love love love the callback to Diwali.  Of course.  Pam was v. interested in that booklet of Michael's, which can only mean good things for Jim. 

The paradox of Pam & Jim's communication issues is rich -- on the one hand they can speak volumes without saying a word, but on the other hand, they can't just freaking be direct!  Arg!   But of course, Dork=Love. 

Time for Pam & Jim to crack the books! Hee! 



Author's Response:

Yes, I suspect that will turn out to be the start of a whole new direction of communication.  And Jim thought Katy was forward.  ;-)

Thanks for all the help - I seriously could not have done it without your expertise!  ;-) 

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2007 07:16 pm Title: Come out to play....the future lies with you

Is it wrong that no matter how many times I read the title "Tickle His Pickle", I giggle?  This is a great chapter.  I like the way they progress from tension to ease with each other.  And what a fun ride it was, eh?  (No pun intended)  Excellent job, Moxie.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I have to agree wit Jim that this has got to be the worst book title ever.  But I'm sure he'll love that book in time.  ;-)

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: jecksia Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2007 07:07 pm Title: Come out to play....the future lies with you

There were so many points when I thought that chapter could end, but it didn't. It just kept going... I have yet to decide if that's a good or bad thing though. ;)

Author's Response: Um, thanks? 

Reviewer: MixedBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 09:54 pm Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...

this is AWESOME!! jim, pam, and a porn mag. please, please continue!!


Author's Response: Thanks!  Ask and ye shall receive....

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 07:26 pm Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...

What an incredible restaurant - no wonder Jim took her there - 4 diamond rating, awesome sounding food and all the art! And I loved that Jim said their first night "together" was the best night of his life.  So romantic.

Author's Response:

I truly believe that given the chance, Jim would practically overdo the showering her with all the good things he could think of.  So when I saw that restaurant I knew he'd find a reaosn to take her.  And yeah, maybe I do write Jim as too much of a romantic, but isn't it nice that someone is?  :-)  

As usual, thanks for the review, dear Kay

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 06:42 pm Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...

Ok, so first of all, I love any story that has Pam finding porn and Jim getting all embarassed. It just shows that Jim is human and yet STILL perfect because he thinks Pam is so much better. And this was just so well written. I hope there's more, but I wouldn't want that to take away from a certain other story I know you're working on!

Author's Response: Hmm....what story could you possibly mean??  ;-)  Thanks so much for the review - I'm happy you liked it. 

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 05:59 pm Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...

Oh, Moxie, this adorkable story had me giggling throughout.  How much do we love FNB??  She's awesome, being so teasingly sweet and getting Jim to open up to her.  Much love to you for writing this!



Author's Response: Thanks, EH!  I hope to have a follow up in the near future that puts Pam on the hot seat, so to speak....  How much fun would Jim have with that??  ;-)

Reviewer: two toasters Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 04:25 pm Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...

Gah, moxie how do you do it?!  Even looking at porno mags you make them the most adorable creatures ever.  You write Pam and Jim's voices so well, as someone who's just starting to write fanfic (haven't posted any yet but will soon) I envy you that!  We are so lucky to have you here! 

Author's Response:

Wow - thank you so much!  I agree that writing Jim and Pam in a believable voice is crucial to good fanfic, so I'm awfully tickled that you think I've been able to capture it.  It must be all the time I spend obsessing about the two of them!  ;-)

I'll be looking for your writing soon! 

Reviewer: I Know This Much Is True Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 04:19 pm Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...

Haha! I loved it! :D


Author's Response: Thank you!  I appreciate you taking the time to let me know!  :-)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 03:59 pm Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...

Pam is nosy and it I love that in FNB.

Author's Response:

heehee - well, it's certainly a good sign that she didn't act like she didn't see them.  How can she get what she wants like that??  :-)

Thanks for the review, gotkona

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 02:20 pm Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...

Best title of an Office fic ever. Can't wait to see the rest! 

Author's Response: Wow - I'll take that honour gladly!  Thanks! 

Reviewer: McGigi Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 02:16 pm Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...

This was fun! I like how porn sparked a great conversation between them, it's very believable.

Author's Response: Thanks, McGigi - I struggled a bit with this one, but the idea was too good to pass up.  :-)

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 01:44 pm Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...

I'm with the general consensus that embarrassed Jim is irresistible.  This is great fun.  My favorite line:

Yes, I do.” She nodded. “I want to know everything about you.”

The name Boink Magazine still cracks me the hell up!



Author's Response: I wonder how much fun embarrassed Pam is going to be.  I know Jim will certainly enjoy making her squirm!

Reviewer: receptionist Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 01:16 pm Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...

very cute!  I look forward to reading more of this story!  :)

Author's Response: thanks!  More will come when inspiration strikes!  :-)

Reviewer: Ellelque Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 12:26 pm Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...

Jim is such a naughty boy!  Creme Brulee and Porn, great combination!

Author's Response: Yes, nothing like decadence in all forms.  :-)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 11:41 am Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...

First, I still laugh everytime I hear the name of that mag (and now this story.) How cute is embarrassed Jim? Are we going to get to see any lessons that boy learned in his, uh.. studies? And, lastly...I actually have a torch (not a mamby pamby tiny kitchen one - a real one) for creme brulee and such. The thought of Jim wielding it could make a girl think....in sum. Yay, Moxie.

Author's Response: Embarrassed!Jim is one of the sweetest incarnations ever.  I could certainly get used to him.  Of course, I'm open to just about every flavour of Jim conceivable......  :-)  Thanks for being part of the lunacy.  I couldn't have a better companion.

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 11:34 am Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...

I Loved it! Yeaaah Moxie!


Author's Response: haha - thanks!  Consider it an early birthday present.  ;-)

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 11:27 am Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...

first I must say that I appreciate your distinction between playboy and other magazines.  It is a goal in my life to be a playmate and people who have never even seen the magazine get all pissy at me when they don't understand how not like porn it is.  *stepping off my soapbox*

This was adorable, I'm pretty sure a lot of people (including myself) have gotten to have this fun conversation when that first piece of pornograpy is discovered (jack johnson CD case...haha) Ok, too much about me.  I loved this! :) 

 



Author's Response:

My dad used to have a subscription to Playboy, so I have many memories of paging through his collection when I was young.  ;-)  I agree that it's a horse of a completely different color.  :-)

Glad you like it!! 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 10:40 am Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...

I love that at the root of the whole conversation is Pam wanting to know everything about Jim.  So sweet.  Even reading porn they are cute!!!  Gah!

"anything less than what you really want is a poor substitute.”  Sad, but true.  Man, S3 sucked in some ways!!!!

I want Jim to come to my house & make crème brûlée.  Wait, is that a new euphemism?

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y254/lisahoo/office/brulee.jpg 



Author's Response:

Oh, thanks for the link - in my haste to post (my mother's arrival is imminent) I forgot the best part!  :-)

Thanks for the rec and the review!!  You're the best!

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