Date: July 12, 2007 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love this little rap up chapter. It's just completely lovely.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I;m going to keep posting here just to keep getting nice reviews ;]
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2007 08:30 am Title: Chapter 6
What a great ending to a lovely story. This whole thing has just been very insightful. I think you really had a good handle on Pam's inner thoughts. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2007 01:53 am Title: Chapter 6
So, at this point I don't think I even have to tell you, but WAY TO ROCK MY SOCKS!!! I hate that it's over but I love the way you ended it. And the flshback thing was great. So win/win.../win.
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks! I'm glad everyone liked it! It's so cool to have over 6,000 reads...best feeling EVARRR. Seriously, if you decide you want to post yours, send it to me and I'll beta! =D
Date: July 11, 2007 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
Very cute. This is your first story, right? Nice first effort! I'm looking forward to reading more from you. The pink and red analogy was really sweet.
Author's Response: Yes, it's my first try. Thank you so much! I'm working on one right now, should be up later tonight. =D
Date: July 11, 2007 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm sorry to see this one end but enjoyed every minute of it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I plan to write a few more first-person like this, but I'm gonna play with tenses. I hope you'll come back once I get a few more stories posted! =D
Date: July 11, 2007 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
great! very cute! one comment, though--pedals are on a bike. peTals are on a flower. ;-)
Author's Response: Oi! How'd I not catch that? Thanks!! =D
Date: July 11, 2007 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
"Pam, I love you. If you say yes, tonight, I’ll set a date, tonight." Best fanfic line, ever! Literally went "ooooh!" out loud. Great ending, great first story!
Author's Response: Thank you! =D Yay!
Date: July 11, 2007 07:37 am Title: Chapter 5
"he's... such a girl" lol, i love that line!
Author's Response: Thanks, lol, so do I. Come back later tonight (Wednesday) for the final chapter!
Date: July 11, 2007 12:51 am Title: Chapter 5
absolutely adorable. LOVED jim's letter.
Author's Response: Thanks! Be sure to come back later today (Wednesday) for the final chapter of this epic love story, 'kay? =D
10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
Just wanted to say that every time I read a new chapter, I clap my hands & say "yay!" and then "I want to read the rest :(" I seriosuly do that. Beta? You don't need no stinking beta. It's perfect! :D
Author's Response: Every time you leave me a note, or address me personally over at TWoP, I seriously smile like an idiot and go "Somebody likes my writing!" and do a little dance. No joke. HUG!
8 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, that letter is just, um...adorkable! If I were Pam, I'd do him for that.
Author's Response:
Um um um um ummmmmmmmm! Double-post! Hee.
that's okay. I did that earlier. Don't feel bad!
Thanks for the review. You don't feel it was too OOC for Jim? =o...I kind of did. A teensy bit. But like I said, we don't know how Romantic!Jim is.
Date: July 10, 2007 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, jeez, those carnations are about the cutest thing ever.
No pressure, though. Seriously. Gah! So freaking adorable!!!
Author's Response: Ahh, thank you! I wasn't sure how to end that, or if that at all seemed like anything Jim might do. But then I realized we don't entirely know how romantic Jim can be, because all we see is work-Jim, and prankster-Jim. Hee. Thank you, though! =D
Author's Response: Ahh, thank you! I wasn't sure how to end that, or if that at all seemed like anything Jim might do. But then I realized we don't entirely know how romantic Jim can be, because all we see is work-Jim, and prankster-Jim. Hee. Thank you, though! =D
Author's Response: Ew, I don't know why that posted twice. Sorry, folks!
Date: July 07, 2007 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
First person is incredibly difficult but you are doing an amazing job. Exactly how I imagine Pam is feeling and your version of Jim ain't too shabby either. Can't wait for more. Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you :]
8 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2007 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter...I did notice a small typo in this sentence: "She had to now…If she…She knows now, anyway. I wanted to tell her that you guys…" I assume you meant the word "know".
Other than that, this story has me so captivated...and GOOD for JIM telling off that conceited waitress!
Author's Response: HUG. Thank you! *runs to correct it* :D
10 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2007 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
So cute! And of course Sandy's flirting with him... who wouldn't want to? Another great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! :]
Date: July 05, 2007 12:51 am Title: Chapter 3
squeeeee. I'm grinning like a fool.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! :]
Date: July 04, 2007 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
Another great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: July 04, 2007 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
oh please, I happen to be a very soft rocker...hehe
this chapter is not that bad so quit yer whinin'!! :)
Author's Response: lol! I disagree, I think you rock rather loudly. lol, Thanks again!
10 [Report This]Date: July 04, 2007 06:49 am Title: Chapter 3
The first person format is fun to read when it's done well and you're doing a great job with it. Your take on Pam and her thoughts is very believable. My favorite line: That’s a stupid thought. Jim’s never at a loss for words; he just doesn’t know what to say sometimes
So yeah, really great work....the kind of story where I'll be excited when I see that it's updated.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! That was my favorite part, too. ;]
Date: July 04, 2007 05:40 am Title: Chapter 3
Soooo cute! I really love how you've captured the spirit of Jim and Pam and Pam's paranoia about everything. Those thoughts that run through her head are exactly how I imagine everything happening. Fantastic job done again!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You're maybe too kind, hehe!
8 [Report This]Date: July 02, 2007 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Why are you the way that you are? Honestly, every time I try to do something fun, or exciting, you make it... BETTER. I love... so much about the person that you choose to be.
Oh, Pam. I'm in love with her through your words. PLEASE write more soon.
Author's Response: Because I'm amazing. lol. Thank you SO much!
Date: July 02, 2007 09:27 am Title: Chapter 2
"I scramble over to the closet, and spend too long searching for something I know I don’t own"- this is so true!
This chapter perfectly captures her nervousness, and I felt nervous for her sake, too! I LOVED the ending, and I cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: July 02, 2007 08:29 am Title: Chapter 2
I really like this! It's interesting to have the story written as a first person POV. It works well.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: July 02, 2007 07:03 am Title: Chapter 2
I loved this. It gave me chills! I can't wait to see what the card says. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! Wednesday sounds good to me!
Date: July 02, 2007 06:37 am Title: Chapter 2
Nicely written! You've conveyed Pam's inner thoughts and insecurities really well. (Hence your title) I love the reference to the dojo. Looking forward to the next post.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)