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Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 02, 2009 01:09 am Title: Chapter 1

I pretty much lost it at "pee-pee face." Well done.

Reviewer: FictionInReality Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2007 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

LOVED the last line. It's so terrible it's wonderful!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2007 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awesomely funny bad fic!  Jim's line here totally cracked me up!

PAM:  Well, yeah, cause I really didn’t know for a while.  But I know now.

  JIM: Know what? 

Reviewer: BlueJeanBaby Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2007 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

LOL!!!  My favorite part:

How did you know?  About you loving me?

Oh, Kelly told me.

Well that, and the stuff about not loving Karen.  Great Stuff!



Author's Response: Yeah, Kelly realizing anything obvious, that's real fiction.  Glad you got a laugh.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2007 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Bad fic is so fun!

pee pee face. That made me snort.

That was fun. Yep. :)

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