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Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2007 11:28 pm Title: 67 syllables

I really liked this. Very poetic. Does a good job of summarizing Jim's thoughts over the last couple years. 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2007 09:54 pm Title: 67 syllables

Yay for fresh starts and happy endings!!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 05:31 am Title: 67 syllables

55 words is what I counted. And I really liked it, and liked how it compared the things. And if anyone hasn't told you yet, you go to challenges on the top banner, find the 55 word challenge, click respond to challenge. it brings up a page with all your stories, and you checkmark this one, and then it works. I believe that is how it works.

Great job! 



Author's Response: Thank, Emily! You folks are a very helpful bunch.  Thanks for reading! :-) 

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 09, 2007 08:28 am Title: 67 syllables

first - loved all 55 words of it.  :-)

second - to add your story, go here: http://mtt.just-once.net/fanfiction/modules/challenges/challenges.php?chalid=69

then click the "respond to the challenge" button.  It will bring up your list of posted stories and you can tick the appropriate box(es).  Hope that helps! 



Author's Response: Thanks, Moxie!  I looked everywhere on the site for that info.   Thanks for reading. :-) 

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09, 2007 05:27 am Title: 67 syllables

Too much "no"- thank goodness for the fresh start! Very nice, concise little piece.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review.   55 words is a LOT harder than I thought it would be. :-)  

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2007 11:22 pm Title: 67 syllables

You add your story (which you've done), then separately, click above on Challenges.  Find the 55 challenge.  Click on "answer challenge" (or something like that).  A list of your stories comes up and you click on the one you want your apply to the challenge.

Nice job!  I agree, 55 words.  Hurray for a fresh start and a yes. 



Author's Response: Thanks for the heads up, TLK!   I was looking all over the site for the info.   Thanks for reading. :-) 

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