10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
YAY! I love brave Pam! I wish she had done it like that, but that would have cut short all the delicious angst!
--Strider
10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2007 08:33 am Title: Chapter 1
so short and sweet! even though it's only 55 words, i felt pam's emotion and courage. love, love, love this!
Date: July 13, 2007 05:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh how that would have been perfect. Because she did. I know she did. She must have felt stuff even then.
10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2007 04:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww...if only, right? :) Very nicely done. You've crammed so much emotion and meaning into such a small amount of words. I'm in awe.
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2007 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was sweet. Why do I have the feeling "the urge is overwhelming" also applies to your need to get this out of your system?
Date: July 12, 2007 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Just think of the agita they could have spared us if they'd only done it your way. This conveys a complete moment/mini-story in a nutshell - being succinct is the hardest thing of all, IMO. And that's something you do so well in all your stories. (Speaking of which, can I confess I keep checking back to see if you've posted Jim's remaining fantasies? Don't mean to be a nudge...well, maybe a little ;-)
Date: July 12, 2007 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it. Much better ending to that episode.
Date: July 12, 2007 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
If only if, Pam had said those words their future would have been oh so different. I like how Pam and Jim both share the "secret wish." Very nicely done!