Date: July 25, 2007 11:32 am Title: Chapter 13 - The Interrogations - Jim
How dare they set Jim up!! I don't know who really did it, but keep writing, don't hold out on us! Great work!
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2007 09:40 am Title: Chapter 13 - The Interrogations - Jim
Jim was pretty calm during all that. I can't believe that the officers don't see this as a setup. Can't wait for more to come (twss)!
9 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2007 09:39 am Title: Chapter 13 - The Interrogations - Jim
Poor Jim! What are they going to do to him?
Wonderful job. I love how Pam and Phyllis came to his rescue. I still think Karen might have something to do with it, but then why would she kill Roy. She'd want him around to keep Pam away....
Date: July 25, 2007 09:38 am Title: Chapter 13 - The Interrogations - Jim
i'm leaving you another review...but you already know what it's going to say!!
Date: July 25, 2007 09:31 am Title: Chapter 12 - The Interrogations - Pam
awwwwwwwwwww....i love it! i love pam and i love jim and i love this story!! sorry llq, but i really do like this story and you're doing a fantastic job! (twss or hs)
Date: July 25, 2007 09:09 am Title: Chapter 13 - The Interrogations - Jim
Excellent chapter! I really loved the dialogue here, everything flowed and moved really well and you are really building the tension. I cannot wait for more about this mystery!
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2007 09:03 am Title: Chapter 13 - The Interrogations - Jim
Wow... what a way to find out that the girl of your dreams actually does love you.... from the police...lol... Poor Jim! This is so good, I've been checking all morning for this chapter! A real whodunnit. Maybe you should've tossed in Columbo or The Closer. THAT would be ridiculous! lol... Ok... I have my suspect. I'm curious to hear other folks ideas...
Date: July 25, 2007 04:34 am Title: Chapter 12 - The Interrogations - Pam
That was great, but I can't believe that Jim is the only questionable suspect. Can't wait for chapter 13. I hope others start leaving reviews. The story is great so far.
Date: July 25, 2007 04:28 am Title: Chapter 11 - The Interrogations - Stanley, Meredith, Creed, Darryl and Karen
Great job on all the minor characters!
9 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2007 11:40 am Title: Chapter 12 - The Interrogations - Pam
No poor Jim! So cute that Pam wanted to stick next to him. so her :) please hurry at posting your next chapter
Date: July 24, 2007 11:29 am Title: Chapter 12 - The Interrogations - Pam
Definately Phyllis. It's always the quiet ones.
Date: July 23, 2007 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Interrogations - Pam
I love this story!!
It's soo good. Poor Jim!
More Please! It's the highlight of my day!
Date: July 23, 2007 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Interrogations - Pam
I'm loving this story! Great work!!
Date: July 23, 2007 10:18 am Title: Chapter 11 - The Interrogations - Stanley, Meredith, Creed, Darryl and Karen
I LOVE How you did Creed! Great Job with him saying he didnt kill THAT man. lol.
I hate Karen! She just totally screwed Jim (not literally). Now Jim is probably going to jail. But I guess Karen will get her wish. Pam and Jim wont be together....
Date: July 23, 2007 06:07 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
"He was an asshole with a small penis." THAT is hilarious. lol.... and Karen, Karen, Karen.... I've got my eye on you....
Date: July 22, 2007 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Interrogations - Stanley, Meredith, Creed, Darryl and Karen
Oh no!! What's Jim going to do? He didn't do it!
Date: July 22, 2007 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Interrogations - Stanley, Meredith, Creed, Darryl and Karen
now its getting good!! i cant wait for the rest
Date: July 22, 2007 01:41 am Title: Chapter 11 - The Interrogations - Stanley, Meredith, Creed, Darryl and Karen
man i love creed's interview hilarious!
Date: July 21, 2007 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Interrogations - Stanley, Meredith, Creed, Darryl and Karen
Dang, Karen needs to learn to shut her mouth, dosen't she. I can't wait to see how Pam reacts to Detective Dimwit when he accuses Jim. Lord, beer him help. :)
Date: July 21, 2007 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Interrogations - Stanley, Meredith, Creed, Darryl and Karen
I absofruitly love this story!!! you've written all of the characters beautifully....creed of course, is my favorite. can't wait for the JAM interviews...bravo chicky! :)
Author's Response: Sweetcheeks, you complete me!
10 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2007 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Interrogations - Stanley, Meredith, Creed, Darryl and Karen
I am really enjoying the suspense of this story. I have a few theories on who did it, but I am not sure exactly who. LOVED the Creed interview, and will probably think about it next time I sue a public bathroom.
Author's Response: Creed is the easiest character I find to writa as. During his headshot interviews on the show and on his Creed Thoughts he is just so blunt. I just think of the most outrageous thing and put it down.
Date: July 21, 2007 11:15 am Title: Chapter 11 - The Interrogations - Stanley, Meredith, Creed, Darryl and Karen
Man, this is excellent. And who is trying to frame Jim? I had suspected that Karen was in on it, gettingJim to go to the office when the killer was there, but after her interview, I'm not sure. She wasn't the one killing Roy, but she could've had someone in on it...but why?
I'm all kinds of intrigued. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: The nice thing about this cast is that you could create some motives. Jim was just obviously the best one to frame. Remember that this took place before The Beach and The Job, so Pam and Jim are still slightly astranged. This will give an interesting way for Jim and Karen to break up and Jim and Pam to finally unite. Nothing makes a person look closer at their life than when it is in jeopardy. I have clues littered through out the interrogations. But I didn't want to unrealistic and give them all a reason to kill Roy. Like, for the life of me, I could not come up with a reason for Stanley to kill him. But, you never know, maybe he is hiding something? LOL
Date: July 20, 2007 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
I love the way you have every character´s personality down. Thanks for posting so quickly and keep them coming! (twss) ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2007 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 10 - The Interrogations - Oscar and Angela
i'm loving this story. i can't wait to see where this is headed ... thanks for posting so fast!!
Author's Response: I have been writing the chapters two at a time to give people a nice flow of information. But I think I need to space them out more to build some suspense.
Date: July 20, 2007 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 10 - The Interrogations - Oscar and Angela
Loved the twist with the Oscar seeing the detective at the bar ;) . You really nailed Angela! (twss) I like how you made her smile at the thought of Dwights manliness.