10 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2007 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Arriving at Work
Very inventive putting Creed's dialogue right after Angela asks who in the office would steal $100. Especially with his little five-fingered habit. Or are you referencing his VW pot stash? LOL Now I just know Creed can't be the killer. Right?
Date: July 14, 2007 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The Discovery
oh man, I dont know what you have planned for this, but it sounds really good so far....i like how pam thought of jim first
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can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: July 14, 2007 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
well, for some reason it didn't save my last review so.....
LLQ, i love this series....very different twist you've taken, can't wait to read more!!! i'll be waiting on the edge of my seat!! :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2007 07:52 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Discovery
I wanted to add stars so this is a duplicate review.
Date: July 14, 2007 07:51 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Discovery
Michael and Dwight are like a comedy team sometimes. You put those 2 together in any situation, even one as tragic as this and they really crack you up! Better than Laurel and Hardy. Great characterization. I could so see those two screaming like little girls.
Date: July 14, 2007 07:49 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
Excellent! This is going somewhere original. I can almost see it as film noir.
Date: July 14, 2007 06:34 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
look forward to seeing where this is going
10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2007 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The Discovery
I love that Pam's immediate thought is of Jim. Classic. And my favorite part, of course, is MICHAEL'S WET PANTS!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2007 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
Excellent! I love that Jim was this close to meeting his doom and was rescued by Karen's ill-timed call. Bring it on! I love a good thriller! ;)
Date: July 13, 2007 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The Discovery
Love it! Please post soon:)
10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2007 08:31 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
Nice! I love murder mysteries! Plus, JIm will be the main suspect? That's great! Gotta see more!
Date: July 12, 2007 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
Ohh, murder mysteries.. my favorite! It makes me giddy that it's set in an Office world. I cannot wait to see where this goes.. seriously.