Date: August 04, 2007 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Warning
Oh no!! What's going on?
I still love this!!
Date: August 04, 2007 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Warning
This is the point that I needlessly tell you I am hooked to this damn thing. Its sort of ridiculous, I've got all these speculations and posible suspects, and I can't wait to find out what next!
Date: August 04, 2007 09:41 am Title: Chapter 21 - The Warning
Im going on record saying that I think Its Toby! So good, please update soon!
9 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2007 09:41 am Title: Chapter 21 - The Warning
I'm dying to know who it is! I don't think it's Karen, Michael, or Pam. But that's about all I know.
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2007 07:19 am Title: Chapter 21 - The Warning
Ooh! Plot thickens! If those scissors have Roy's blood on there, doesn't that vindicate Jim? I mean, he sure couldn't have planted them. Hm...
Suspect list remains with Andy and Karen. Andy, for his jealousy and rage issues. And Karen, she has this wronged woman thing to fall back on now and hide her possible escape. Maybe they're in on it together!
Seriously, your fic has eaten my brain. And I'm sure since I've suspected all this, it's all wrong. So I'll stop now and leave it to you. Can't wait for more!
Date: August 04, 2007 06:37 am Title: Chapter 21 - The Warning
I finally got to bed last night reading this fic and
can I tell you it is great!! I have *no* idea who the heck did it. --do you? can you tell me...please? And can I say I wake up this morning--new chappy, bonus!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. These reviews make me write faster. They make it seem so important to get to the next chapter and please you. I'm like a puppy needing strokes, pitiful isn't it? Anyway, the good thing is the killer reveal is coming up in the next two chapters but not before Pam gets herself in some very dangerous territory.
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2007 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 20 - The Meeting
Creed and Katy, YUCK!
Author's Response: In the interrogation I alluded to this as well. You never know when an old character will pop up. Besides I wanted to have a time to have Michael respond to it. Katy wanted a little...experience.
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2007 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 20 - The Meeting
"I sir, was with a fair young lass I met at the Starbucks." Andy bragged and smiled. He puffed out his chest. "I don't remember her name..." "Okay." Michael wrote Andy's name and the word Alone at Home
Bwah! Excellent. And hm, okay, now it's Andy at the forefront for me. Until this chapter, I thought it possible that it wasn't an officemate but simply someone who had a connection with an officemate. Now, it's clear.
And while I definitely see guilt in Karen, Roy's a big guy and this was a pretty brutal killing. Woman scorned or not, I just don't think she could do it. Andy, on the other hand... He has just that edge of crazy that could throw someone like Roy offguard.
Can't wait for the reveal!
Author's Response: You would be surprised at how strong and ferocious a angry woman can be. LOL
Date: August 03, 2007 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 20 - The Meeting
"I sir, was with a fair young lass I met at the Starbucks." Andy bragged and smiled. He puffed out his chest. "I don't remember her name..."
"Okay." Michael wrote Andy's name and the word Alone at Home.
Awesome.
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2007 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 20 - The Meeting
Poor Toby, never gets a break! LOL, kinky Phyllis! Great chapter!
Date: August 03, 2007 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 20 - The Meeting
*gasp* What's going on?!?!
I love this, by the way!!! :-)
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2007 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
OMG, this is the best chapter yet! You write these characters so well, especially Michael, you have him down to a science. Favorite line, Darryl: "Do you work at this branch? What's your ass doing here?" lol!
And the suspense at the end was great!
Date: August 03, 2007 11:55 am Title: Chapter 19 - The Return of Employees
Ohhhhhhhhhh....SNAP! Type, baby, type!
Author's Response: Just for you Cate The Great! I will now enter Chapter 20.
Date: August 03, 2007 11:26 am Title: Chapter 19 - The Return of Employees
100! I'm almost done! I swear!
Author's Response: Lebow, as my 100th review, you may now recieve my 1st born child, Alex. He is cute, funny and very sanitary. But if that doesn't work out, I think I am going to mail you a gift card to Chili's. You rock my world Chick!
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2007 11:14 am Title: Chapter 17 - Visiting Hours
Great breakup and Jam moment.
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2007 11:09 am Title: Chapter 16 - Phone Calls
Well Little Miss Karen is sure looking suspicious. I need to keep reading. You have me hooked.
Date: August 02, 2007 10:11 am Title: Chapter 19 - The Return of Employees
lol review whore! Niiiiiiiiiiiice :) I love how Pam plays Michael like a fiddle. And Karen...what a beeeotch! :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2007 07:19 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
How very smart of Pam to have Michael and Dwight head the investigation so that she can do some thorough observation! love it, can´t wait to see what she comes up with
10 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2007 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Fancy New Beesly has a plan
So Pam is going to save the day! How Nancy Drew, or since I'm a guy, I should reference The Hardy Boys. Like the irony of Jim and Pam opening their hearts with a barrier between them. Symbolic of their past relationship. There was always some kind of damn barrier.
Date: August 01, 2007 07:46 am Title: Chapter 18 - Fancy New Beesly has a plan
It is just like Pam to make it her responsibility to help Jim out. Can't wait to see what clues she comes up with.
Date: August 01, 2007 07:15 am Title: Chapter 18 - Fancy New Beesly has a plan
I'm starting to suspect the purse girl Katy because I can see Michael giving keys to even her...and she definitely knew Jim's car and apartment since she dated him....oooh. haha I'm probably way off but this story is awesome and I was so excited to see an update this morning. You're really keeping us all guessing!
Date: July 31, 2007 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Killer's Plot
You have got to update quickly... this story is killing me! I am so worried for Jim! (It may be time to get some therapy... these are ficitonal characters...) Great story.
And someone earlier said it might be Pam, please no. I would love to see some serious post-incarceration mush when they finally get together. And Karen rotting in jail would be just fine.(OK, calling therapist now...)
Date: July 31, 2007 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Visiting Hours
Ok, please please update soon! I am officially loving this story. How many chapters do you think it will be? This is so different than all the other stories and is going in my Favorites! WELL DONE!
Date: July 31, 2007 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Visiting Hours
Is it really awful that this is the first chapter that I may suspect Pam? I mean, I know she has an alibi and all, but for some reason, I got a bad feeling. Crazy, right? Right??
Liked how you ended things with Karen, though I don't doubt we'll see her again, considering she would most likely used for evidence against Jim.
Another great chapter, you're doing such an excellent job building the suspense here. Looking forward to more.
10 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2007 11:25 am Title: Chapter 17 - Visiting Hours
Thank God She's finally Gone!!! Its about D*mn time! ;)
Very sweet and ironic JAM moment. *sigh* :)