Date: January 16, 2007 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
fluff is always good :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I think so, too. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! I think so, too. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2006 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't know if this was intentional, but I loved that the only word spoken aloud throughout the entire course of the fic was Jim saying Pam, at the end - I love that because it doesn't kill the mood of the rest of the fic, and I love that because it actually goes with the rest of the fic, and that's great.
I love this story. I love the idea that Phyllis sends e-mails to him because let's face it, she would, probably, if she had the chance, because that woman is one of those sweet old matchmakers we see in old movies and things.
And I love the bits in italics!
I love a lot more but I'm not very coherent when I start rambling about stories I really liked so I'm just...going to stop now. Yes. I'm going to read more of your stories now too. =P
Author's Response:
Wow. Thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2006 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
"...the perfect circle of shock formed by his lips..."
Guh. This was such a sweet moment(s).
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2006 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this story - especially this line - "They each snuggle in closer, each careful not to wake the other, wanting to live forever in this moment, to let this new favorite memory sear itself into their minds, into their hearts.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much.
10 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2006 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, this was just precious. One of my new favorites.
Author's Response:
Aw! Thanks!
8 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2006 09:34 am Title: Chapter 1
"...as though there's an invisible elastic band connecting them. It's been pulled taut with wanting and waiting and time, and now it's recoiling..." Great image. I love that there's no dialogue. Nice job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I love that image.
9 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2006 09:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Awwww.....so sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks!
9 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2006 08:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Mmmm. Yummy. The shifting POV and flash-back/forward format give this a wonderful feeling.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2006 07:33 am Title: Chapter 1
She feels herself pulled towards him, as though there's an invisible elastic band connecting them. It's been pulled taut with wanting and waiting and time, and now it's recoiling, moving their hearts back together twice as quickly as they moved apart.
That in particular (and the story as a whole) was simply sweet and incredibly lovely.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. That was one of my favorite bits, too.
9 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2006 06:03 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved this. So sweet and poetic. Well done! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
9 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2006 04:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Hee! This is just ridiculously sweet. I like the lack of dialogue a lot. They have mastered the speaking without talking on the show, that's for sure. This is just fantastic.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! That's what I was thinking when I wrote it. They definitely don't need words.