Date: February 10, 2008 09:01 am Title: Close Call
OMG shooting at the vents -- very scary! And I'm curious about what Bob did...
Date: February 10, 2008 08:58 am Title: Into the Darkness
This is so intense! Loving it. =)
Date: February 10, 2008 08:56 am Title: Split-Second Decisions
Ooooh this is so good!
Date: November 20, 2007 06:26 pm Title: Close Call
Ahh! So good! I really hope you're still updating this -- it's fantastic. I love seeing Jim and Pam in a completely surreal situation like this. Even amid the insanity, you've managed to keep them well in character.
Date: November 02, 2007 05:25 am Title: Close Call
Wow! I just read the whole story! This is GREAT! I haven't read a fic like it and I love it!!! Update really soon!
Date: October 31, 2007 09:50 pm Title: Close Call
Oh, I'm so happy to see this story updated! I really liked this part. It's scary and freaky and yet, so incredibly sweet and intimate. Jim's hand on Pam's ankle - wow!
Date: October 31, 2007 03:38 pm Title: Close Call
Oooh! Very fun! please keep going!
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2007 12:25 pm Title: Close Call
i'm loving the suspense! great story!
Date: October 31, 2007 10:40 am Title: Close Call
gah! Seriously the whole time I was sitting here with my hand clenched and so scared. I can't wait to see if Jim/Pam can escape and help everyone else too! *bites nails* Hope it's not too long before next installment strikes :) Great job
Date: October 31, 2007 09:32 am Title: Close Call
i was thrilled to see you posted a new chapter. this really gives me the heebie jeebies and i love it (: i can't wait to see what happens next with the office, and of course with Jim and Pam's relationship (;
8 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2007 08:36 am Title: Close Call
Puff! It's funny: I was just thinking the other day about this story, and wondered what ever happened to it. So, I'm happy to see it back! And I really like the way you ratchet up the tension here as well. I can believe Michael would alternate between bold hero and sniveling victim.
Good job, and here's hoping that more comes soon!
Author's Response: Awww!! thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: October 29, 2007 05:35 pm Title: Into the Darkness
ohhmyygoddd. i got chills so many times throughout this already! i can't WAIT until you add the next part.
it has me so scared and excited, but it also has the perfect amount of JAM (:
i hope you add the next part soon !
Date: July 18, 2007 06:15 pm Title: Into the Darkness
Good team work from those two! Really enjoying this and looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2007 06:12 pm Title: Into the Darkness
Excellent Idea! Timely too. Jim could so be John McCain.
Author's Response: Thanks!!!
Date: July 18, 2007 05:55 pm Title: Into the Darkness
Naturally the shoes had to come off. It's Die Hard. They should make fists with their toes, though. It's the John McClane thing to do.
Fun!
Author's Response: Hahaha, "make fists with their toes". Awesome. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: July 18, 2007 11:57 am Title: Into the Darkness
Excellent! The changes you made helped an already strong chapter just that much better! I loved the little moments of JAM awkwardness and humor interspersed with the tension of the moment. I love where this story is headed. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2007 11:56 am Title: Into the Darkness
Nothing sexier than being covered in air vent dust. ;-) I'll bet Pam will find it hard to resist in the next chapter. (Hey, all summer blockbusters have gratutious sex and nudity - don't forget that!!) :-)
Can't wait to read more, Puff!
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks so much!
Date: July 16, 2007 02:50 pm Title: Split-Second Decisions
Pretty cool so far! You've somehow managed to make it both kind of freaky/tense and fun/cute - great combination!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: July 16, 2007 02:08 pm Title: Split-Second Decisions
John McClane's not dead yet, anyway. I like "Air ducts: a world of adventure."
I'd recently thought about Die Hard in The Office (on the day I saw #4), but I didn't really want to write it, so I'm glad that you are.
I love how movie and TV shows always have people climbing through the air ducts. And the air ducts are always plenty big. ("I know, let's drive our SUV through the air ducts!" Okay, not quite, but still!
Anyway, fun!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2007 11:32 am Title: Split-Second Decisions
Nifty! You HAVE to keep this going!
Author's Response: Thank you! I definitely will!
Date: July 16, 2007 10:10 am Title: Split-Second Decisions
hehe this could be fun :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: July 16, 2007 09:59 am Title: Split-Second Decisions
The supply closet is a good start! And what the heck could anyone want at Dunder-Mifflin? Hope you are updating soon!
Author's Response: Heee, your questions will be answered in time... Thanks!!
Date: July 16, 2007 08:55 am Title: Split-Second Decisions
What a fun premise and great start. Always fun to see Jim and Pam out of their natural element. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you like it!
Date: July 16, 2007 08:51 am Title: Split-Second Decisions
Nicely done, Puff! I love the changes you made. Makes the action flow a lot smoother and really tightens the story up a bit. Now, here's hoping that at some point, SOMEONE says the infamous "Yippie Ki-yay..." line. (Crosses fingers and hopes it's Michael and that he screws it up.) :)
Look forward to the next installment!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :oD
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2007 08:33 am Title: Split-Second Decisions
oh, how fun, Puff!! Looking forward to more...
Author's Response: Thank you, Moxie!