Date: July 25, 2007 07:48 pm Title: A Scarf
I bet you he's thinking that the ability to give women orgasms just by looking at them would come in handy. It's so much more straightforward than actually, y'know, talking...
Author's Response:
I definitely agree.
Lol, thanks for reading Alex!
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2007 07:46 pm Title: A Scarf
I'm not sure if "pleasure" is the right way to describe this fic, but it's pretty damn good. Can't wait for more pain! Bring it on.
Author's Response: Haha, it's not very often you hear the words "Can't wait for more pain!". Especially in fanfic :) Thanks for sticking with it!
Date: July 25, 2007 07:33 pm Title: A Scarf
Well written, but a Jam breakup is tough to read! Please write some happy Jam next!
Author's Response: But there's plenty of happy Jam out there! Gotta represent some of the darker stuff, you know? Either way, thanks for reading :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2007 06:48 pm Title: A Scarf
aw....poor jim/pam.
Author's Response: I know, sorry about that : Thanks for reading though!
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2007 06:40 pm Title: A Scarf
Screw the no 'why' comment in my last review. WTF happened! Very intrigued and looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Haha, aww, but I like the mysteriousness of it all, don't you? There's more to come :) Thanks for reading!
Date: July 25, 2007 06:36 pm Title: A Scarf
Why?! Why do you have to break them up before we even get to see them together? Although it sucks to read them like this, this story is aaaamazing!
Author's Response: I'm sorry! It was just an idea nagging at me that I had to write. I'm glad you like the story though :) Thanks for reading!
Date: July 25, 2007 06:19 pm Title: A Scarf
Awww.... poor Jim! Yes, strong men do indeed cry, but they're more likely to blame it on allergies. Brilliant observation, that.
As sad as this is...do I detect a hint that there may be something still between them??? (please?)
Excellent work, as usual!
Author's Response:
Of course some dust flew into his eye. Damn dusty office.
and there might be something there...there might not. Oh the mystery and intrigue!
Many thanks as always Mose :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2007 06:04 pm Title: CDs
So is this going to be completely separate events? 5 different AUs? Whatever you do I like this idea. Furthmore I really like that you didn't go into the 'why' of it all. I think leaving that up the reader really adds something to the story.
Date: July 25, 2007 11:36 am Title: CDs
awww howsad...hopefully by #5 they get back together...or perhaps we geta little more insight into why they broke up
Author's Response: You never know! Sorry to be vague, but I have to keep some mystery, right? :) Thanks for reading!
Date: July 25, 2007 10:26 am Title: CDs
I definitely think that this is gonna be hard to read, but i'm intrigued anyway. it must be that awesome writing of your's :) i really do love the thoughts going through her head with the box, and summer time, and the Snapple.
Author's Response: Well thanks! I appreciate you pushing through even with it being hard to read. Thanks for reading!
Date: July 25, 2007 06:44 am Title: CDs
That made me sad : (
Author's Response: I'm sorry! I hope you still liked it? Thanks for reading anyway!
Date: July 25, 2007 06:30 am Title: CDs
SWIFFER! What are you doing, making my heart hurt like this??!?! Not cool. :P
I'm kidding. Sort of. I agree with those who say that this is a really gutsy move to take, and a bold theme to explore. Especially when read in tandem with "Cliche." They make a very interesting counterpoint to each other.
Beyond the obvious discomfort of the story, I loved the "little" things about this chapter that rang so true: the fact that summertime is a bad time to break up; the thought of juice making her want to cry; the fact that she doesn't even hear her whole name before she shuts the door behind her.
Anyway, I know you'll do great things with this fic, as usual. 'Cause, y'know...you're just that way. :)
Date: July 25, 2007 05:50 am Title: CDs
Really enjoyed this - Pam's thoughts about the summer and Snapple felt spot on. It felt perfectly hurty. I'm looking forward to learning what happened! I kind of love Jim/Pam breakup stories, so thanks for writing one ;)
Author's Response: "Perfectly hurty" is what I was going for so thank you! :) Glad you felt Pam was in character, she's one of my favorites to write. Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2007 04:13 am Title: CDs
I'm so glad you're writing something like this. It's very original.
I hope we found out why they broke up in later chapters...
Author's Response: Thanks! I know it's not everyone's favorite subject, but sometimes they have to be written. Thanks again for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2007 11:15 pm Title: CDs
Wow, these are going ot be tough to read, but you're such a good writer, I'm confident you'll do a wonderful job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Larry! Your support for Cliche meant so much to me, and I truly appreciate the support you have for this one too :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2007 10:43 pm Title: CDs
You ARE a bad person for breaking them up (not really) but I still wanna read more anymore. It'll be interesting to see what else they return, heh.
Author's Response: I know, I know, but I appreciate you giving it a shot! Thanks for reading!
Date: July 24, 2007 10:39 pm Title: CDs
Wow, that's ballsy of you. Keep it up.
Author's Response: I can always count on you, Alex, to appreciate the darker side of fandom ;) Thanks for reading!