Date: July 27, 2007 05:48 am Title: It's Taken Magic to a Primitive New Place
"After all, Scranton on a Thursday night wasn’t exactly New York."
Reading that line - all I could think of was: ain't no party like a scranton party
"Today had turned her world upside-down."
Very true
Good first date story.
Date: July 26, 2007 05:02 pm Title: It's Taken Magic to a Primitive New Place
I am a sucker for JAM First Date stories and this one was just terrific! I loved that the camera crew was there. I hope that's how S4 starts. We just have to see the first date!
Date: July 25, 2007 08:55 pm Title: It's Taken Magic to a Primitive New Place
Glad to see Jim own up to his mistakes with Karen.
Time to play the 'favorite line game': The guy who made her weak with just a kiss and made her strong with just a smile was back. Winner!
I also like how you worked in the presence of the camera crew and how they'd know there is something worth filming. Nicely written.
7 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2007 08:41 pm Title: It's Taken Magic to a Primitive New Place
I like the way you called Jan's implants "upgrades" - very funny! This was a good first date story - I'm glad they both accepted responsibility for their part in the last year.
Date: July 25, 2007 08:00 pm Title: It's Taken Magic to a Primitive New Place
I have a new favorite first date story! I love how Pam won't let Jim lay the whole mess on his own shoulders. Nicely done & in character!
Date: July 25, 2007 07:30 pm Title: It's Taken Magic to a Primitive New Place
very nice!