Reviews For Vanilla
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Reviewer: Foxesjenna42 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2021 04:46 pm Title: Decrescendo

WOW! This was HOT

Reviewer: Pam-Pong Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2008 06:08 pm Title: Momentum

omg I would pay to see xrated Jim and Pam lol.

Reviewer: Pam-Pong Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2008 05:59 pm Title: Substitution

HOT STUFF Oh m geeeee

Reviewer: Pam-Pong Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2008 05:29 pm Title: Orison

omg hot Jimmmmm

Reviewer: Pam-Pong Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2008 04:58 pm Title: Anatomy

OOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHH go Pam

Reviewer: Pam-Pong Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2008 04:50 pm Title: Competition

Ooooooooh Jim needs to do Pam lol

Reviewer: HellaShelle Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2008 11:28 pm Title: Competition

Wow. That actually made me dizzy. That was amazing. I just started reading it, so I had to go back when things started getting serious and check where in the timeline this was happening. And the kink with Ryan?! Whoa. Wow. My mind is blown.

Reviewer: Shassafrass Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 31, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Decrescendo

That is easily one of the sexiest things I have ever read.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2007 11:24 am Title: Competition

That was fantastic!  Keep going!  I don't want it to end... (I know...TWSS)  : )  Seriously, LOVE your stories. 

Reviewer: the_squirrel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 09:54 pm Title: Decrescendo

so hot! i love this naughty pam. i cant wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you, the_squirrel!

Reviewer: jamfan99 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 05:15 pm Title: Competition

Well Annabel, you moved more than my spirit! Wow! That was...wow!

Fantastic job! You've definitely left me satisfied and smiling. Thanks for re-posting this. I can't imagine going through life not having read it. :-)



Author's Response: Thanks, jamfan99! And goodness!

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 03:14 pm Title: Competition

Ah, Vanilla. The most incorrectly titled story ever, because this is SO not "vanilla" in any way. It's every luscious flavor there is, and maybe a couple that haven't been named yet. I only wish there had been more of it, but as it is, it's about the hottest Pam/Jim/Ryan (as voyeur) I've ever read. I love how you've captured Jim's amazement and lust and longing, and how Pam is assertive and yet still in character. So, so jealous of your skills here. :) Thanks for reposting this. I've saved it, of course.

Author's Response: Hee.  I loved starting a story called Vanilla and then watching as it spiralled into a dark, drunken finale in a dirty alleyway.  You are too kind, NeverEnoughJam!

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 02:36 pm Title: Decrescendo

great story!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 01:18 pm Title: Decrescendo

How happy am I to see this back? Still so, so very good. Writing something truly sexy and communicating real desire in words is very difficult. And then to sustain it for 6 chapters and pack such an emotional wallop, all in pitch perfect character? Amazing.

Author's Response: Before writing this, I tended to get a bit coy with love scenes.  A kiss, a quick sketch of bliss, pillow talk.  I remember putting the 'M' on the first chapter, and thinking, "All right, now you know where this is going," as sort of a dare to myself.  So I'm so glad you think it worked!

Reviewer: collardgreens Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 11:04 am Title: Decrescendo

oh my god yes. I was looking for this and couldn't find it and was really unhappy. yay. I still wish it would continue but oh well. 

Author's Response: Thanks, collardgreens!  Nope, just ends, all angsty and disfunctional.

Reviewer: officefreak Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 10:23 am Title: Decrescendo

Holy hot damn, Batman! I'm never going to be able to explain to my boss how the stains got on my office chair.....

Author's Response: Try a little baking soda and water, officefreak.  :)

Reviewer: Evan Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 09:23 am Title: Competition

Please write more of this story.  I love that tension.  Pretty please?  Or at least write something like it again.  I remember reading it before and loving it, but I don't comment until the end of a story.  And you never finished it.  So, please stop writing Talk and finish this one.  I like it so much better.



Author's Response: Sorry Evan, that's actually the end.  But I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 08:00 am Title: Decrescendo

Damn it. Every. Single. Time. Every single time, this story kills me. Thank you for putting this back up, because when I realised you took this off I felt a little sad, because you don't know what you've got 'till it's gone they paved paradise and uhm. So good. 

I'll have a better review the next time I read it, y'know, a couple of weeks, or days.

Will you be putting The Time Machine back up? Because that may not have been as hot as this and Open, but I kind of adored it for all that it was. I can even remember little things from it, like My Valentine, that poem about racism, and other things which I can't believe I remember better than the smut, but there's me for you.



Author's Response: Hi moofoot!  I am so touched that you remember The Time Machine so well!  Unfortunately, no, that one's not coming back.  It never made as much of a splash as Open or Vanilla, but I have a soft spot in my heart for it, and I'm hoping to rework it into something else.  Thanks so much for remembering it!

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