Reviews For What Jim Saw
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Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 31, 2007 08:53 am Title: Chapter 1

awww.. but i love the snggle bear...

 definitely fluffy. good thing i love fluff!

Reviewer: Shassafrass Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2007 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2007 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

55 normal, everyday words = 1 incredible look into the mind of Jim Halpert that day.  I agree, this is exactly what he saw.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: I Like Jam and No Flim Flam Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2007 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for the clarification!!  I think I had kind of an idea, but I just wanted to make sure because I seem to have a problem where I use such terms kind of out of context and then I get embarassed.  

Author's Response: No problem, happy to be of assistance! It's always better to ask than to go on not knowing. You know, Answers.com actually (suprisingly) has a definition, if that helps.

Reviewer: I Like Jam and No Flim Flam Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2007 11:50 am Title: Chapter 1

The first thing that came to my mind after I read this was "Awww!"  And that is something I rarely say.   Well done!

I have to ask, though... What is a squee muscle? I am fairly new to the Fan Fiction scene, and I have seen "squee" used a few times on this site.  I registered today just so that I could comment on your story and ask you about 'squee." 



Author's Response: Well I'm glad you made an exception! Squee is pretty much something people say when they're excited and happy and giggling and just... overwhelmed with the fluff-factor. I'm not sure if I'm explaining this right. Pam at the end of The Job? The perfect manifestation of squee. The muscle though I just made up for my own amusement!

Reviewer: JamLover101 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2007 11:48 am Title: Chapter 1

aw this i so cute!

i would imagine this is exactly what he saw 



Author's Response: Thank you! I imagine it was something along these lines.

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2007 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1

**sigh** That's so sweet.  From this day forward I choose to believe that is what Jim saw. 


Author's Response: I'm going to join you in that. It does funny things to my squee muscle (yes it does exist, despite what medical professionals may tell me). Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2007 09:59 am Title: Chapter 1

yeah, i like to think thats what he saw also :)


Author's Response: It could be no other way :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2007 09:51 am Title: Chapter 1

Aww, that is a great version of the 'life passing before your eyes' concept.  And I hate that evil Snuggle bear, too.  It's demonic.  Like Chuckie or something.

Author's Response: I'm glad I'm not alone. It's just creepily happy and nothing innocent is that obsessed with the softness of my sheets. Thanks for reading!

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