Date: August 07, 2007 09:51 am Title: Kelly Clarkson
gahhhh, so adorable. love it, keep it coming!
Date: August 07, 2007 07:48 am Title: Old Friends - The Thing That Makes Everyone Happy
This was just all kinds of cute! I am really enjoying this story and hope we get to see some scenes like these on the show! You are so good at dialogue and truly nailing their voices. Such a talent!
9 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2007 07:36 am Title: Old Friends - The Thing That Makes Everyone Happy
Oh Ms LoveFool - this was my favoritest of all the chapters. I can totally see Pam doing something like that and being mortified years later. And Jim's reaction was FANTASTIC. More please. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2007 07:09 am Title: Old Friends - The Thing That Makes Everyone Happy
Pitch perfect.
Date: August 07, 2007 06:32 am Title: Old Friends - The Thing That Makes Everyone Happy
I am absolutely addicted to these little everyday moments...this one is especially sweet, because I'm a sucker for any story where Jim really knows that Pam loves him back equally. And has. LOVE the title of this one...and the fabric softener call back too - very clever, my friend.
Date: August 07, 2007 05:15 am Title: Old Friends - The Thing That Makes Everyone Happy
All of these are great! Keep it up!
10 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2007 05:10 am Title: Old Friends - The Thing That Makes Everyone Happy
I'm telling Greg Daniels that you're leaking scenes from season 4! :P
This was fantastic! I love their banter, and Pam's "other" secret? Brilliant. Embarrassed Pam and Jim is always the right choice for adorkableness. :)
8 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2007 04:51 am Title: Old Friends - The Thing That Makes Everyone Happy
Good one--I've got a big smile on my face.
Date: August 05, 2007 11:40 am Title: Domestic God
Okay. I would make Jim move in even if he didn't know how to make Eggs Benedict. Shit, I don't think I've ever made it before! Can you update like right now?
Date: August 04, 2007 03:34 pm Title: Domestic God
This:
"From now on Pam...try and be prepared, ok?"
She sighed a bit dreamily. "Ok."
is adorkable. Pam is in a post-Halpert dream state and Jim is busy looking for food. Just awesome.
Looking foward to the next chapter.
Date: August 04, 2007 03:31 pm Title: Kelly Clarkson
These lines, so funny:
"I don't know why you're following me...you're totally walking there."
"Jim...please....I didn't mean to hurt your feelings. Be my boyfriend again."
"No. We're through."
Reminded me of the Kristen interview when Jenna embarrasses John and she follows after him saying, "John will you still be my friend?" So cute.
Looking foward to more moments of S4 happiness!
Date: August 04, 2007 09:12 am Title: Domestic God
Awesome!!! I really like your writing style, quick and clean. Please keep this series going!
Date: August 04, 2007 09:09 am Title: Kelly Clarkson
hahaha...my friend seems like the most uppity music person you'd ever meet and is super smart (went to Berkeley, is in grad school on a full ride) and she has the cheesiest Top 40 on her iPod. It's for "working out"...sure it is. Anyway, I just meant to say that this is very realistic. Moving on to the next chapter :)
Date: August 03, 2007 01:19 pm Title: Domestic God
Hell yeah he should move in! The boy knows how to make Hollandaise sauce?!? Dear God.
I'm pretty sure I've said this in every review I've left you, but I'm going to say it again because it's true: You're ruining the chance of me ever finding a man that lives up to your Jim Halpert. So when I'm a crazy old cat lady, I'm blaming you.
Oh, and uhh, this is really good :D Thought I should mention that.
Author's Response: Well maybe we can be crazy cat ladies together, because I'm pretty sure I've been ruined as well! lol. Poor us. ....Well, at least we have fictional Jim to entertain us. lol
Date: August 03, 2007 09:57 am Title: Domestic God
aww... so sweet! I love the idea of Jim cooking something fancy... :)
Author's Response: :-)
Date: August 03, 2007 09:55 am Title: Kelly Clarkson
Just a suggestion: you may want to clarify that Jim didn't really break up with her over a Kelly Clarkson song (maybe add that he smiled after he said "we're through". Just a thought. Great story, though! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion. I appreciate your feedback!
Date: August 03, 2007 09:18 am Title: Domestic God
These are so sweet!! Great voices, too. Really enjoying them and looking forward to more:)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks Bitterpill! I appreciate the review and hope you enjoy the rest!
8 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2007 08:40 am Title: Domestic God
Awww! Awwwwwwwwww!!! This is adorable. *loves*
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!!!!! Thanks so much for the feedback. I really appreciate it.
Date: August 03, 2007 07:38 am Title: Domestic God
Heh... I've always believed that Jim is a better cook than we've seen. Just because he eats ham and cheese or tuna fish for lunch, doesn't mean he can't make eggs benedict. It's totally plausible. Well done.
Author's Response: absolutely. I bring Lean Cuisine to work, but I can still make something yummy if I need to! Thanks so much for the feedback!!!
Date: August 03, 2007 07:37 am Title: Kelly Clarkson
Y'know...I had been kicking around an idea to do something like this, but I won't now, since it'd never be as good as this! :)
And poor Jim... I suppose the only thing more shameful to have on one's iPod than Kelly Clarkson is Hanson.
Author's Response:
Mose, I say -- if you've got an idea -- bring it! No doubt you've got something unique to bring to the table. As far as Kelly Clarkson being only one worse than Hanson......oh bite your tongue! I love me some KC. Far more talented than Hanson...come on! lol
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2007 07:12 am Title: Domestic God
Oh! These are so fun!! I look forward to more. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks Moxie!!! So glad you liked them! More to come soon! :-)
Date: August 03, 2007 07:02 am Title: Domestic God
This was so much fun! Thank you! So awesome.
Pam blinked again to clear the fog of lust. Ahahaha!
Author's Response: hehhehe. I imagine it's a pretty thick fog with Jim in the room, huh! Thanks so much for the review!
Date: August 03, 2007 07:00 am Title: Domestic God
Once again, it's almost eery how well you capture these characters' voices - the wit, the aching sweetness - and so simply, without overwriting it. In other word, just how it plays on the show. Love, love, love hollandaise-making, bare torsoed Jim (he cooked it for his mom? Be still my maternal heart) and lusty, happy Pam. And, need I tell you that their last exchange made me grin like an idiot? I'm already addicted - more please.
Author's Response: :-) I'm SO glad you're enjoying this. Really! Your reviews always inspire me. And yeah-- I'm glad you appreciated that last bit. It was definitely MY favorite part.
Date: August 03, 2007 06:54 am Title: Kelly Clarkson
I literally made a squee-like sound when I saw a new fic by you this a.m....and more parts to come? Pennies from heaven. Embarassed, annoyed Jim - adorkability defined. Last line is gold too.
Author's Response: Colette just so you know - I feel the same way when I see a story from you. Heck I feel that way when I see a REVIEW from you! Absolutely more to come. Adorkable is definitely my favorite word for Jim so look for more of that!
Date: August 03, 2007 06:47 am Title: Domestic God
Good God, Cooking!Jim is sexy. Please consult me the next time you're looking for somewhere to live. Yeah, Pam, get right on that, would you?
Author's Response: Seriously....who wouldn't take him up on THAT offer right away?! And I've always thought Jim cooking would be hella sexy, so I'm so glad you agree!