10 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2009 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Holy crap that was amazing! I have goosebumps. The whole walkie-talkie thing was perfect and so realistic. I need to know what happens next!!!
Date: August 03, 2007 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I write this in an effort to get you to write a story about this. It is an excellent premise. Keep writing.
Author's Response: thanks for commenting! at this point, i'm not sure if i will write a sequel since i can't decide what i want jim to do! ;) but if a sequel or companion piece pops up, i will definitely post it here
7 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2007 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this was beautiful and sad and funny (Michael and Dwight) and perhaps hopeful at the end? I was so surprised to see Pam was marrying Roy, I was not expecting that! This was my favorite line - "And all Jim wants to do is to reach out to her, tell her that she is beautiful, that he loves her and only her and that it will be for always." Congrats on your first Office fic!
Author's Response:
thank you for commenting :) i am so glad you thought Michael and Dwight were funny, as I was worried my characterization of them might not come off well
Date: August 03, 2007 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow, i really didn't expect it to be pam and roys wedding at first. he has made his decision. he is going to speak up thats what i say.
Author's Response: that's one of the things i like about the open ending... it gives the reader a chance to decide on their own what jim decided to do :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2007 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh man, sneaky twist! I really hope Jim does something! So good, you should write a sequel!
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing! and i'm glad my little twist at the end worked ;)