8 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2007 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like that fun and happiness in this chapter out-weighed the anger and hurt feelings. I hope they're on the road out of angst-ville.
8 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2007 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
So sad and angsty. I like that he said he didn't want to break up. And I totally loved this line - "She was nearly shouting from the doorframe, feeling slightly like a trashy wife from COPS in her tee shirt and too big jeans, yelling after the man she loved as he ignored her."
9 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2007 10:15 am Title: Chapter 2
This really makes me look forward to seeing office reaction to the relationship when the new season starts. Oh, I HOPE it's a relationship! Those writers have a way of toying with our emotions...
Date: August 07, 2007 12:46 am Title: Chapter 1
lately i have been trying to stay clear of angst (been in the veronica mars fandom for way too long) but i really like your writing. can't wait to see were you take this =]
10 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2007 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm not usually an angst fan, but this is really good. A nice example of people who love each other behaving in normal, human ways but ending up causing pain. Which hopefully will be eventually eased.
Date: August 06, 2007 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
please write more!
i like this... :-)
7 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2007 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Tense. Very good. I'm interested to see where it goes.
Date: August 06, 2007 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw poor Jim. I hope he kept the ring, and he gets the answer he wants later.
Date: August 06, 2007 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this. Can't wait for next chapter.
Date: August 06, 2007 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like it so far (especially the adorable Gilmore Girls reference there at the beginning). I'd love to see where this is going.