Date: August 14, 2007 05:03 am Title: Drive
Aw, man! I was so lost in that story I didn't see the end coming!
I like apartments. More! More! More!
Author's Response: Thanks, Beeswax. More is here!
Date: August 13, 2007 11:59 pm Title: Drive
*sigh* You're a horrible tease, and that's all I'm saying until you give me what I want. ;)
Author's Response: Sorry, Cassandra Mulder! No huge cliffhanger in Chapter 5, I promise! :)
Date: August 13, 2007 11:35 pm Title: Drive
That was a pretty fun taxi ride and climbing of a few flights of stairs.
I am really enjoying the uncomplicated awkwardness. Nice work!
Author's Response: Thanks, desert island!
Date: August 13, 2007 11:35 pm Title: Drive
Huge fan of apartments. Can't wait to see hers - I'm psychically running down the hall too (loved that part, by the way.) This continues to be so good it's like being held captive. In the best possible way.
Author's Response: Yay! I like apartments myself. Thanks, Colette!
Date: August 13, 2007 11:23 pm Title: Drive
Whoa....eek!
Author's Response: Well, good!
10 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2007 10:44 pm Title: Drive
You rock. Seriously - and I cannot wait for an update.
Author's Response: Thanks, kells8995. Took a while, but I got around to it eventually.
Date: August 13, 2007 03:02 pm Title: Interruption
Oooo. Dessert! Fun stuff.
Love the ending with a bit of girl talk.
Date: August 13, 2007 01:24 pm Title: Axis
yay for this chapter. Yay for what the next chapter brings.
Date: August 12, 2007 05:09 pm Title: Axis
Yes. Yes. And yes.
Can't wait for more. This is great!
Date: August 12, 2007 05:00 pm Title: Axis
Too bad there's no spellchecker in that closet. CLASSIC. I just love so many things about this. Everyting from Michael sending that tactless note to their table and to the kiss at the end that was perfectly timed. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: August 12, 2007 04:53 pm Title: Interruption
I love this a LOT. The small moment that really got to me was Jim having his hand on the small of her back during this entire thing. Kind of reminding her that YES we are on a date, and I understand the gravity of that...even we are having dinner with Michael and Jan! Love it!
Date: August 12, 2007 10:08 am Title: Axis
I have issues negotiating those three things when I am drunk, so I can only imagine what you have in store for our fav couple :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2007 08:15 am Title: Axis
Am I sitting in someone else’s chair?
Brilliant line. Truly brilliant. So true to Jim and his insight.
Also brilliant: every word that followed that. Wow.
Date: August 12, 2007 08:09 am Title: Axis
I love all the little touches you put to this story: Michael sends champagne and can't spell grease, Pam is being so sweet to Michael going beyond what she should probably do, Jim can really read her thoughts, the tie discussion,... It's all very lovely. :)
Date: August 12, 2007 08:04 am Title: Axis
I think possibly my favorite moment was the switch in conversation topics to Jim's tie. Very cute. Although Michael's note was pretty classic, too! And of course, I love the last few paragraphs.
Date: August 12, 2007 04:07 am Title: Axis
She reads it again. “He’s such a closet romantic.”
“Yeah,” he says. “Too bad there’s no spellchecker in that closet.”
I died at that. Brilliance!
I am a fan of that lineup, so nice teaser. Bring it!
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 10:19 pm Title: Axis
aww. "Hi."
So cute. I'm in love with Jim Halpert. And I'm in love with you, but don't take it the wrong way ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 09:37 pm Title: Axis
Hahaha! Great story, and your "chapter end" notes made me crack up!
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 07:42 pm Title: Axis
Yayyayyayyayyayyay! I'm so happyhappyhappy!!!!!! Here's to taxi...stairs...apartment...and SOON!!!!
Date: August 11, 2007 07:28 pm Title: Axis
Lovely! Even the brief double-date isn't too over the top. Looking forward to more...
9 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 06:34 pm Title: Axis
Aww, I liked that. Totally looking forward to the next part - love that line-up!
8 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 06:06 pm Title: Axis
“there’s being nice, and then there’s being a martyr. And then there’s straight-up batshit crazy.” My new favorite line! And I just love that the kissing has started....I can't wait for the taxi, stairs, apartment you've promosed!
8 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 05:53 pm Title: Interruption
"Jim here’s had an eight-inch jones for our Pammy for… how long now, Jim?” Your Michael rocked! Sounded just like him.
And this was beautiful: “It is new. And also very, very old,” she says."
Date: August 11, 2007 05:49 pm Title: Changes
I thought Pam might look like Karen after her "makeover" since I figured poor Kelly was too angry and upset to pay full attention to what she was doing. And I love your dialogue in this chapter - especially: “How would you be without the cool and indifferent face?”
“All slack-jawed and drooling,” he says.
Date: August 11, 2007 03:08 pm Title: Axis
I'm really enjoying this! I too laughed out loud at Michael's note. That's so something he would do. Oh, Michael. I also thought their conversation about Jan was very realistic - and showed right there the differences between Pam and Karen. I am anxiously awaiting the next installment after that teaser!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, supergirlsudz! More is in progress.