10 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2010 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was a great sandwich if it brought them closer. I can see that happening and that's the point, right? I'm feeling the WAFFY from that story. Good job!
Date: August 09, 2007 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic! Great way of showing how Jim and Pam are stuck in their ways (and possibly better off that way?)
Date: August 08, 2007 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Are you kidding me? You are GREAT at this stuff- keep writing!!!
Date: August 08, 2007 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1
the last? oh no you dont you write way too well to leave me with one fic. Continue writting. Write on me friend.
Date: August 08, 2007 09:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. You give Jim an aura of hopelessness that I think was always hinted at but never clearly seen. And a near-death experience just might have been enough to shake Pam out of her comfort zone earlier. Great work!
Date: August 08, 2007 07:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Great story. Great symbolism. Makes Jim's attempts to change a la Stamford, Karen and Corporate seem all the more desperate. He certainly looked "dead" plenty of times during the second half of S3, and not just because he was playing Dracula.
Another winner!
10 [Report This]Date: August 08, 2007 07:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Consider yourself a welcome addition to my reading list. Nice work.
Date: August 08, 2007 06:12 am Title: Chapter 1
You know what, I was actually kind of outraged when I saw this story on the Most Recent page, because believe it or not this is one of my favourite stories on ff.net and I knew that title and I read the first couple of lines and it sounded so very familiar and just a couple of lines later I realised it wasn't a rip-off, it was the original. Took me long enough.
I love how this makes me laugh and feel like Jim is a pathetic wanker at the same time. He hates the taste, but when he wants to change, he can't, because without it he just may die. Literally. And it makes me laugh the way you got it across, because there were some characteristics [Dwight's, especially] that were exactly right. Actually all possible characteristics that could've been put in this story were, and all were exactly right. You are...too. good.
I would go so lit-geek-deep into this you'd...block my reviews, if that were possible, so I'll stop. But probably the last Office fic of yours better just be what you copied and pasted off ff.net, because if this is your last I'm coming after you with a gun.
I'm serious. Just as serious about it as I am with my reviewing, and I don't review just about anything because then I start talking nonstop and Kellily like this.