Date: December 13, 2007 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 10 - The Double Bed
Lovely, lovely story :).
9 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2007 11:36 am Title: Chapter 9 - Closing In
Good thing the police showed up when they did.
Date: November 01, 2007 11:25 am Title: Chapter 8 - Trapped
Another twist. This is getting interesting.
Date: November 01, 2007 11:21 am Title: Chapter 7 - The Confrontation
I think Pam throwing of the robe is a great description of what Pam would do in this situation. Wow. I can't believe Toby's the bad guy.
Date: October 20, 2007 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Closing In
*breathes sigh of relief* Thank god Pam is okay. I can't wait to see where this is going!
Date: October 16, 2007 10:39 am Title: Chapter 7 - The Confrontation
I haven't been back on the fanfic site since it's been down and I was really happy to see this story was updated. I really enjoyed the first paper cut story too and now this one is really starting to get exciting. I like to think that Toby might be slightly evil so I like where you're taking this.
Date: October 15, 2007 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Trapped
This is a great story and I love twists!
Date: October 12, 2007 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 7 - The Confrontation
OMG! Toby?!? I twitching in my seat right now. Update again soon!
9 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2007 11:24 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Film
A strange turn of events, but the suspense is building. I was wondering why there was so much Jim and Pam, but I see how it fits into the last paragraph. I love Jim's finally thought. I hope he is okay.
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2007 07:58 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Film
OMG!!! talk about a cliffhanger! I´m in shock!
Ok, best line, I think ever... ¨I have never seen someone so inept and clueless, who actually made it to management¨... Genius!
oh, and I love the little bit of Jam-ness <O><->
Date: September 11, 2007 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Some Killer Coffee!
Crap! Not Jim!
Date: September 11, 2007 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Film
YEAH!! What a great suprise today. It's perfect. Keep it comin'.
Date: September 11, 2007 10:40 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Film
noooo! don't do that to me!
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Date: September 07, 2007 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The Investigation
don't go by the reviews....this story is awesome just like the first one. Kelly is so funny. I can totally see her reacting that way if something happened to her Ryan. Keep up the great story--can't wait for the update
9 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2007 10:50 am Title: Chapter 5 - The Investigation
You know you can always count on me for a review. I think the story is great so far. I don't find it as suspenseful as the last mystery, but I'm sure that will come as the story continues. In the last story I felt scared for the office employees, now I'm just waiting to hear more.
Author's Response: I don't know, I think I just lost it in this one. I may have to have a murder attempt on someone or something. LOL
10 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 08:22 am Title: Chapter 5 - The Investigation
Ok, so now I´m trying to think of everyone that has a personal cup... I hope next chapter gives off some clues :-)... great so far!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2007 11:41 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Interrogation
Who would the inteded victim have been? I can't wait to find out. Great job with Creed's character.
10 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2007 07:04 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Interrogation
Still enjoying this and appreciated Kelly's interview in this chapter. Just on the borderline of insane and heartbroken.
My guesses always end up being obsolete, but Dwight, Angela, Andy, and Jan remain as my contenders. And since Angela was the killer in the last story, I'm thinking that wouldn't happen again, so...
Oh, I had one question. Where is the documentary crew? They didn't catch any of this? In the last story, it was after hours, but now, I'm surprised they didn't see any of this considering it was a regular work day.
Author's Response: The documentary crew soes not participate, they merely document. They didn't catch anything on the camera, or did they? They started filming at the beginning of the business day. Curious what the film the day before would show.
Date: August 31, 2007 05:46 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Interrogation
Loved the interviews. I think you got Meredith, Creed, and Kelly perfectly.
OK, I´m certain Ryan was not the intended victim here. We´ll see who detective Roberts leans towards now. I have my suspect, but I´m not saying who just yet... I want to see where you take this...
Date: August 30, 2007 10:41 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Detective
Interesting firing going on. Now there seems to be so many suspects. Can't wait for Chapter 4!
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2007 11:49 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Detective
Unsuryped is now my favorite Michael word.
Date: August 24, 2007 08:53 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Detective
now we´re rolling... love it so far... and great twist with the termination of Meredith and Creed!
Favorite line ¨well detective, he´s kind of a moron¨ lol!
9 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2007 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Paranoia
Keep up the great story. I love how you make Dwight so full of useful information.
Date: August 21, 2007 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Some Killer Coffee!
Great story so far. Can't wait to see what happens and if Ryan was the only intended victim.
Date: August 16, 2007 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Paranoia
Dude, I LOVE your mysteries. And this time, I'm positive it was Phyllis. POSITIVE.
Author's Response: I promise I am going to continue this story soon, I have been tied up, not literally, but I stayed tuned.