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Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 06:14 pm Title: The Carpet: The Benefits of Oxygen

This whole series is a sequence of small and sweet and yet heart-breaking moments.  I love it.

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2006 01:14 am Title: Office Olympics: Paperclips

"He can hear her being beautiful right now..."  Seriously?  That floored me....beautiful. 

"And he’s really honestly getting tired of the way subtext tastes on the tip of his tongue."  Wonderful

I love your work; your bring artistry and maturity to their world, but still keep everything in character.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 06:59 pm Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

I'm so glad you moved this story over here. I could see the picture, or at least the Pam part of it.

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 09:03 am Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

You are so good at this game. This chapter was just lovely & poingnant...you can always feel all of the emotion running just below the surface in all of your stories.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 08:21 am Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

Each chapter I think is my favorite, but I now know that this one is! I just loved it, especially the last line. So very poignant. Awesome series.

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 07:05 am Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

Oh. OH. I really loved this one. Poor Jim. And I think we can definitely pretend that this happened. Because it's just heartbreaking and wonderful at the same time.

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 06:05 am Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

*heart breaks a little*  Poor, poor Jim.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 05:07 am Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

Poor Jim.  Opportunities just keep whizzing past him.  And oh - the last line kills.  Because it's so true.

It's lovely - but that's no surprise. :)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 03:55 am Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

“Don’t marry him. Please.”   The refrain of my entire summer. Oh, Jim. *sigh*

 

I love this series so much.


Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2006 10:26 pm Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

Lovely.  I loved this:

He’s going to say, “I broke up with Katy because when Roy set the date for your wedding, I really, truly realized that I never wanted to be with anyone but you.”

Perfect!

Reviewer: bonorocks Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2006 10:19 pm Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

I love this series!  I'm so glad you finally posted it over here.  I think this chapter flowed well with the rest of the vignettes you wrote.

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