9 [Report This]Date: May 07, 2008 07:44 pm Title: Tell Me You Can.
I liked the dark serrious nature of the story. It reminded me a little bit of the story of O. Have you read it. I appreciated the restraint factor not present in other stories truely a new take. Nice writting.
Date: September 19, 2007 04:13 am Title: Tell Me You Can.
Love forceful Jim! "You don't say it, you don't touch me." So hot!
Date: August 18, 2007 01:47 pm Title: Tell Me You Can.
Great job on your first multichapter fic. Let's hope they do work it out in the coming season.
9 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2007 08:51 am Title: Tell Me You Can.
Angry sex! Yeah! :D Very nice
9 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2007 08:27 am Title: Tell Me You Can.
That was hot. Good job!
7 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2007 05:47 am Title: What the hell is he going to do?
I really like first fight fics and I think you're handling it quite well. And maybe I like first fight fics, because I know some how these two characters will work it out (which is kind of funny to say, considering it really only is up to the writer). But it's how these two work out those differences that really makes the story, and I'm confident that you are going in the right direction. I really like how you have them contemplating not only what the other has said, but what they had said as well. I also really like how you have them realize that they both don't want this to end and they can't leave each other (Thank God, Jim didn't leave the apartment.) I think this is key, because it means that they understand that a fight is not the be all and end all.
Date: August 16, 2007 09:20 pm Title: Why did her mouth betray her like that?
Good story!
I think Jim and Pam have some making up to do!
Author's Response: You know it! =)
8 [Report This]Date: August 16, 2007 09:19 pm Title: Why did her mouth betray her like that?
I'm really enjoying this. I love the voice, the 3rd person present tense. It's different than most fic, and it gives a good feeling of being right there with them, in the moment.
Also am enjoying that it feels like a little angry/angsty reconciliatory smut is on the horizon. Never a bad thing. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I never really planned anything out for this one, just sat down and typed, so I am really glad you're enjoying it!
Date: August 16, 2007 09:18 pm Title: Why did her mouth betray her like that?
I have no idea if this is good or not! oh, no, enough with the coy self-deprecation; this is good. I love the last line in this chapter.
Author's Response: Wow! Well, I dont feel so intimidated anymore! Thanks so much for the encouragement!
Date: August 15, 2007 08:38 pm Title: What the hell is he going to do?
I'm intrigued. Please update soon!
Also, I have no idea - is it "I Can't?" I can't wait to find out.