Reviews For On Your Way to the Top
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 
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Date: August 21, 2007 05:08 am Title: Chapter 1
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2007 05:08 am Title: Chapter 1
I really, really like this. I like that Karen and Ryan are the two folks who don't really seem to click at DM:Scranton, and even here they don't really click with each other, either, and that feels absolutely real and right. Regardless, both of them are looking for something else, and you capture that sense perfectly- particularly Karen's complete weariness with this place and these people. Brava!
Reviewer: kells8995 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2007 09:09 am Title: Chapter 1
10 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2007 09:09 am Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this. It was very realistic and in character, and totally believable.
Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2007 09:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: August 17, 2007 09:01 am Title: Chapter 1
it was good i like the conversation. ryan was good even if still ryan-y. i think karen will turn out alright