Date: December 14, 2006 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
I almost skipped down to the end because I didn't want to wait to find out what Jim's message was. But it was worth it to wait. Just lovely. :)
Date: August 20, 2006 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this--loved the way you wrote Pam's voice and the Ryan/cell phone interaction was hysterical. You're killing me with that ending though :)
Date: August 18, 2006 10:44 am Title: Chapter 1
OH! Great cliffhanger. I like the matter-of-fact tone Pam has when she tells the story. I can hear her talking just this way.
Date: August 18, 2006 10:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Cute. Poor Ryan and his cell, which is used by both Kelly and Michael to track him down constantly!
Date: August 18, 2006 10:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Great story! I love how you interspersed Jim's message with the rest of the story, revealing a little bit more each time. I really enjoyed this.
Date: August 18, 2006 07:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved this. I can't really pinpoint one thing. Just everything about it was awesome, really. Nice job!
Date: August 18, 2006 06:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay! That was cute. I loved the Ryan/cell phone interaction.