10 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2007 11:23 am Title: Chapter 4: Viva Las Pantalones!
More please! I love it so far! (although it makes me miss Vegas :P)
9 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2007 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 4: Viva Las Pantalones!
Another chapter please- now?
I like this, especially the Ryan/Kelly
Date: September 25, 2007 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 4: Viva Las Pantalones!
That was a great chapter! I love your Ryan and Kelly :) Especially the extra note that Kelly left for Dwight and the Cristal. Oh, and Dwangela's "milk and cookies". Yikes!
Date: September 25, 2007 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 4: Viva Las Pantalones!
Oh man -- Ryan will never get rid of Kelly now! But I guess he won't mind. Or notice.
Pam, you are a little devil! Not nice to play the Roy card against Jim...
8 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2007 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 4: Viva Las Pantalones!
This chapter read just like an episode on the show. You have everyone's voices down so perfectly! As I read it I could actually hear the character's voices in my head. I also enjoyed the talking heads, especially the last one - I love how Pam got Jim to go to the Eiffel Tower! (and as one with a major fear of heights and flying, I certainly can understand Jim's hesitation.)
Date: September 15, 2007 02:19 pm Title: chapter 1: profoundly inappropriate
Loving your story. I could never capture each character the way you do. Halarious, realistic, very well done.You should start writing for the show!!
Author's Response: thanks, MISS! Oh, how i wish i could write for the show. talk about a dream job! :) thank you for reading!
Date: September 10, 2007 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 3: Six Ways to Have a Bad Time in Vegas
I'm glad you've chosen to go the route of letting Karen be relatable and likeable, doing the right thing and not getting too hurt in the process. And the idea of Dwight wearing Kelly's clothes! Oh, boy. Ha!
Author's Response: just wait. dwight's fashion choices get even worse in the next chapter... and i agree, it's a nice change, writing karen as likable.
Date: September 10, 2007 02:03 pm Title: chapter 1: profoundly inappropriate
Ooh yay update! I cannot wait to read more!
Author's Response: workin' on it :)
Date: September 09, 2007 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 3: Six Ways to Have a Bad Time in Vegas
I am so loving this! I think I may run off to Vegas now :)
Author's Response: totally, me too. meet ya there!!
Date: September 09, 2007 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 3: Six Ways to Have a Bad Time in Vegas
Ha! That first hotel looks like the one where they lived on My Name is Earl. And I can't get the vision of Dwight in a skin-tight glittery tee out of my mind. This story is so fun, I'm really psyched that you're updating it!
Author's Response: i've never watched "earl," but i definitely want to now. yep, i could really picture rainn wearing that myspace tee. i knew i had to fit it into the story somewhere!
7 [Report This]Date: September 09, 2007 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 3: Six Ways to Have a Bad Time in Vegas
Your Michael is so perfect! Sounds just like he does on the show. And the thought of Dwight wearing the "You look hotter on my space" sparkly t-shirt was so funny!
Author's Response: Yeah, I knew Dwight would HAVE to wear some of Kelly's tightest clothes. wait until you see what he wears to the casino after hours...
7 [Report This]Date: September 09, 2007 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 2: stay in an upright position
Angela's Hello kitty suitcase. Ty. Le. Nol. Eye sex. Great chapter.
Hope your job interview went well!
8 [Report This]Date: September 09, 2007 08:41 pm Title: chapter 1: profoundly inappropriate
Great idea for a story! I like that you had Jim and Karen break up amicably and they are friends with no hard feelings (TWSS!)
Author's Response: thanks! i got tired of reading stories with karen as this bitchy minx. it's all too easy to classify her that way, so i thought it would be interesting to take a twist on things. it's funny though, when you take away karen's main reason for being on the show as keeping JAM apart... you have to find a new way to make her interesting!
Date: September 09, 2007 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 3: Six Ways to Have a Bad Time in Vegas
I forgot to mention that Operation Cookie Monster is awesome!!
And the Mirage is pretty damn nice. And they have the volcano fountain out front. When we went there, the white tigers were, uh, trying to make baby white tigers. Niiiiiiice.
Author's Response: I saw something about the volcano fountain on the website. Maybe i'll work that into the story somehow. And hilarious about the white tigers and the Kevin reference. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: September 09, 2007 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 3: Six Ways to Have a Bad Time in Vegas
Fun! Keep going.
Author's Response: thanks! i will! :)
Date: August 27, 2007 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 2: stay in an upright position
I think this was a very funny idea for a story. There's something about Vegas that gets people really excited. (And weird. There's a lot of potential for weird here.) I think you've done a nice job keeping it humorous; some of your Michael lines had me laughing hysterically out loud. I personally enjoy funny stories more than dramatic ones, myself, so I hope you are able to finish this!
Author's Response:
thanks for the kind comments! I love the potential for, well, pretty much anything in Vegas. Drunken marriages, room-swapping, gambling away fortunes... ah, have I already given too much away? ;)
i'm leaving for a trip tomorrow, so i plan on gathering more airport/plane/traveling humor while i'm there. be prepped for more in about a week! :)
Date: August 27, 2007 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 2: stay in an upright position
Hee! Very fun so far.
Author's Response: thanks, Semby! You're quite the prolific reviewer! :)
Date: August 27, 2007 10:12 am Title: Chapter 2: stay in an upright position
I'm a discerning Creed fan and you really had me cracking up at his part - so two thumbs up!
I'm looking forward to more - this is looking like a fun read! :) Thanks!
Author's Response: I have to say, I LOVE writing Creed. The scene between him and Jim was probably my favorite to write so far. And I'm trying to think of a way to work him into the rest of the story. He's totally underutilized on the show, IMHO!
Date: August 27, 2007 06:37 am Title: Chapter 2: stay in an upright position
I was going to ask where they were staying but I guess I have to wait till next chapter.
Date: August 27, 2007 06:13 am Title: chapter 1: profoundly inappropriate
they should do a show on a Vegas trip. It would be so funny.
Author's Response: Yes! Like Casino Night, Part II : )
Date: August 26, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 2: stay in an upright position
what a fun premise! I can't wait to see where you take this! I think it's possible that you do the best Creed voice ever!
Author's Response: thanks, lovefool! i love love LOVE writing Creed. So that's quite a compliment!
10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2007 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 2: stay in an upright position
Yay for the quick update! I love that Dwight lost all of his weapons. I also love Angela's reactions to the 'manhandling'. Oh my god I think I am turning into a Dwangela fan?! Everyone was so spot on, excellent work.
Also, good luck with your interview and hope you have an awesome trip in Ireland.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll be going through MTT withdrawal in Ireland, but it should be an awesome time. Thanks for reading :)
Date: August 26, 2007 03:30 pm Title: chapter 1: profoundly inappropriate
i really like this. its pretty funny already. i love the operation cookie monster. creepy and gross all at the same time.
10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2007 10:01 am Title: chapter 1: profoundly inappropriate
oh my god continue!!!!
this is a goldmine of potential awesomeness!!!!
:)
Date: August 26, 2007 09:19 am Title: chapter 1: profoundly inappropriate
I'm anxious to see where this goes; please continue soon!