Date: December 22, 2007 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
the beginning was great, but i wish you had stopped before the second part.
8 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2007 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Congrats on your first story!! It was lovely - so sweet and romantic. And I loved this line - "Why were they always touching each other, as if they couldn't bare to be apart? "
Date: August 26, 2007 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
EXCELLENT first date. JamBabies. Win.
Date: August 26, 2007 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haha. They got pregnant first date! Wow, that was a sweet story, and so good :)
Date: August 26, 2007 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
all i have are just words... your story was awesome. good job describing them.
Date: August 26, 2007 09:09 am Title: Chapter 1
hee hee I would love to see angela's face watching Pam and Jim's wedding with Pam's "dress that accented her burgeoning pregnancy". This was beautiful
10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2007 08:27 am Title: Chapter 1
forgot to rate!!! :)
Date: August 26, 2007 08:22 am Title: Chapter 1
wow.....this was beautiful. I think it is amazing how well you have captured Jim and Pam! I especially liked that Jim didn't register Pam's "I love you" until she smirked at him and said "absolutely I do". It seemed so like them that Jim would be weary until he heard that.
The ending is great too, everyone thinking they're strange!!
Just wonderful!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. Take another look, I've been tweaking it.