Date: November 19, 2007 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 3: That Swirl means something
Oh wow, I love this. great work. Please update soon. It's very interesting, can't wait for Pam's parent's reaction.
Date: November 17, 2007 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: Life Changes
Great story...very true to character and enjoyable. Hope there's more.
8 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2007 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 2: Confirmation of some sort would be nice
"He just proposed to his pregnant girlfriend in the break room of Dunder Mifflin." They're going to be the best parents. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: September 03, 2007 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 2: Confirmation of some sort would be nice
I just LOVED the proposal. So impulsive and so Jim.
I hope you write all the way to the baby's birth!
Date: September 03, 2007 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 2: Confirmation of some sort would be nice
Oh, how awkward - I always think that's such a difficult scenario, when a couple is in love and would most likely be getting married in the not too distant future anyway, but then an unexpected pregnancy happens a little early and they don't want to make it look like they're just getting married because of that. And being forced to make that choice so early in the relationship, eep! And, yes, the break room proposal did lack class, but I appreciate Jim's earnesty and sponteneity.
Date: September 03, 2007 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 2: Confirmation of some sort would be nice
The whole rubbing of the belly thing is sooo true... the moment you find out you're hands just gravitate there... Please continue :)
Date: September 03, 2007 11:18 am Title: Chapter 2: Confirmation of some sort would be nice
I'm liking this story, keep up the good work!
Date: September 03, 2007 08:17 am Title: Chapter 2: Confirmation of some sort would be nice
"Excuse me," Kevin said, his eyes moving between them. He obviously could feel the tension. "I'd like a grape soda."
Classic Kevin.
Nice job with the tension here. I'm enjoying this! -CH
Date: September 03, 2007 12:00 am Title: Chapter 2: Confirmation of some sort would be nice
i like this soooo much! yay for the challenge and superyay for your writing this great story. keep it up!
Date: September 02, 2007 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 2: Confirmation of some sort would be nice
I read it through once then had to read it again because it was so cute. I loved every word from "Soda Nazi" (very slick, Halpert) to No class...I could totally see this happening on the show and need you to get hired ASAP so we can see this in season 4
Date: September 02, 2007 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 2: Confirmation of some sort would be nice
This is really good! I think you're handling the shock and tension really well.
Date: September 02, 2007 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1: Life Changes
Maybe he should have stopped and gotten her a Big Gulp
That was such a great line. Iwould have loved the story regardless (especially because you write the characters so true to form) but that line cinched it for me...great job!
Date: September 02, 2007 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 2: Confirmation of some sort would be nice
oh that last moment when she smiled at her belly....ugh. You are great with those little details. So wonderful. And I love that moment when everything came crashing in on Jim....um, hello I just proposed to her - kind of - in the break room. Fabulous.
Date: September 02, 2007 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 2: Confirmation of some sort would be nice
oh I love the last line! So subtle but so cute. Hee. I really hope everything goes well *crosses fingers*
I can't wait to see what happens, great job!
Date: September 02, 2007 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 2: Confirmation of some sort would be nice
LOVE THIS STORY! You really captured the essence of Jim and Pam- great storyline- cant wait to read more!
10 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2007 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 2: Confirmation of some sort would be nice
Fabulous beginning. I'm already hooked. Looking forward to more.
Date: September 02, 2007 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 2: Confirmation of some sort would be nice
I think this is so funny and cute. Can't wait to see how that doctor's appointment goes!
7 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2007 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1: Life Changes
How cute that Jim thought the plus sign was a cross. And Dwight's line "Get ready to have your world flipped, Jim Halpert." - wow. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: September 02, 2007 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1: Life Changes
I love this so much! I really enjoyed how you showed how scared Jim was, but also how supportive of Pam he was.
More please!
Date: September 02, 2007 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 1: Life Changes
Whoa. Definitely my favourite pregnancy-related story thus far. Can't wait for this to be continued. You've got Jim and Pam down, very nice work.
Loved this: She laughed and wiped her eyes. "I don't believe you...continue."
Author's Response:
Sorry this is late, but I just got around to responding to all my reviews!!
Thanks for reading! And I try to get their banter right. I should, I watch the dvds wayyyy too much!
Date: September 02, 2007 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: Life Changes
I can feel the awesomeness already!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Sorry this is late, but I just got around to responding to all my reviews!! Thank you so much for reading. Hope you enjoy!