Date: September 05, 2007 05:48 am Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
This is a great idea for a story! I think we all wondered what would happen if Pam had attended the convention, and I kind of like that she's so angry about the way things turned out rather than just being sad. Very interesting. Although I have to say, I did not expect that slap. I cannot wait to see what happens next. I really hope you update this soon. I hate being left hanging!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I wish we knew exactly how Jim left Scranton, but since we don't it's fun to play around with it. I think if he did leave without saying anything, Pam would have a reason to be a little ticked off at him. I'll try to update as quickly and often as possible.
Date: September 05, 2007 04:50 am Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
continue!!! I'd love to see what happens next.
Author's Response: More will be coming up soon!
Date: September 04, 2007 08:43 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
GO PAM!!! u slap that mofo!! this is gonna be a very interesting and dawesome story!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hope it lives up to your expectations.
Date: September 04, 2007 08:36 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
Snap! FNB got fancy real quick! I love it. I mean, she's being unreasonable, but I love it.
Keep it comin'!
Author's Response: I think most of the time when it comes to hurt feelings, it's hard not to be unreasonable. Glad that you liked it!
Date: September 04, 2007 08:25 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
OOh, great first chap. I am offiually roped into this one!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2007 07:22 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
YEAH!!
let's see how you take that, bitch! (talkin' bout Jim of course.)
Author's Response: It's fun to abuse Jim, isn't it? Thanks for your review!
Date: September 04, 2007 07:15 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
need next chapter like right now!
Author's Response: I'm working on it! How about we trade....the next chapter of Dazed and Confused for the next chapter of this?
Date: September 04, 2007 06:48 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
This is wonderful! Any chance of more chapters?
Author's Response: There will be more chapters! Thanks for your review!
8 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2007 06:44 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
Oh, so good! This is the kind of fanfic I've been waiting for all summer--a good AU with a twist and fabulously written characters.
You've got my interest, and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! I hope I don't disappoint!
Date: September 04, 2007 06:24 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
Wowsa! Was not expecting that slap.
Great story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Hope you like what comes next!
Date: September 04, 2007 06:22 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
i thought she was eager going to make out with him or slap him
i like how it went down
Author's Response: Thanks for you review! I'm glad you liked how it went down.
Date: September 04, 2007 05:44 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
Please tell me there is more to this - I love it already!
Author's Response: There is more....don't worry. There's actually a lot more :)
Date: September 04, 2007 05:20 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
Whew. Way to go FNB! I love Pam being all bold and letting him know he wasn't the only one who was hurt after CN. Great and very true insight.
I love this idea of an AU. She should've just went to the Convention and we wouldn't have had to sit through a whole season of will they/won't they tension.
I'll get off my rant now and tell you that I absolutely loved this beginning! I can't wait to see where you're headed! Loved it :)
Author's Response: Preach on! It would have been nice to avoid most of season 3. I hope you like the middle and the end of this story.
8 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2007 05:15 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
Wow, what a great start! Pam's been simmering all summer, and she just had a public boil-over.
I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I always feel for Pam spending that summer without her best friend and having to go through all of those changes alone.
Date: September 04, 2007 05:15 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
Holy Cow, I wasn't expecting that! Awesome!
Author's Response: I was worried that people wouldn't think that the slap was in-character for Pam, so I'm glad that you liked it.
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2007 05:00 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
um, i think i love this
Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you like where it goes next.
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2007 04:44 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
Awesome start, way to be different.
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the review.
Date: September 04, 2007 04:43 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
gah! oh my! i definitely didn't see that slap coming! but i can understand her anger and frustration. I love your writing and can't wait to see where you go with this. What an interesting AU to explore with these two.
Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to try a little different take on the aftermath of Casino Night. Glad you liked the start.