Date: September 18, 2007 01:29 pm Title: I Wish I Lived In the Land of Fools
SO GOOD.
Date: September 18, 2007 01:23 pm Title: I Wish I Lived In the Land of Fools
Yay for them! I love how you interlaced pieces of S3 into your story in different ways. And Michael. Oh Michael. I love when he shows his sensitive side at those moments. And yay for Meddling Camermen! Cant wait to see where being ready leads Jim/pam....... :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2007 03:28 am Title: Rock Yourself to Sleep
Oh snap...this is good. I mean GOOD. You know, I've read a lot of fanfic and I'm alwaya amazed at how authors can keep a story new & fresh & original. You have done an amazing job at that!! Smut....I need. This was smutty enough to hold me until the next chapter, but the quicker you can update, the better :) Major kudos...I love everything this story chooses to be.
Date: September 17, 2007 08:11 pm Title: Rock Yourself to Sleep
At first I was like, how can it be smut, sort of? I was liek it either is or isn't. Then I read it. Then I was like ohhhhhhh. That's how :)
You're so evil ilke a hobbit (but in the best possible way)
You totally had me, hook line and sinker. *Sigh* But so hot. Next up: for real this time? please? or soon? Hee. Great job!
Date: September 17, 2007 07:33 pm Title: Rock Yourself to Sleep
Great dream, Pam ;) Can't wait to see what you've got cooked up for the next part!
Date: September 17, 2007 06:34 pm Title: Rock Yourself to Sleep
I knew it was just a dream, damn! Now get to work and resolve this impasse, please. I want this to happen for realsies. :)
5 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2007 06:15 pm Title: Rock Yourself to Sleep
haha i was gonna say, did I miss a chapter? how did Jim go from pouting that it was too late to them all of a sudden having sex?? I hope this means PAM will finally actually TELL Jim how she feels and stop expecting him to read her mind. I love this story. :)
Date: September 17, 2007 04:20 pm Title: Rock Yourself to Sleep
Uh, you can skip replying to any of my reviews and write the rest of this! Pam has some goooood dreams.
Date: September 17, 2007 04:19 pm Title: Rock Yourself to Sleep
Oh darn!!!! I was hoping for the real thing.
Date: September 17, 2007 04:07 pm Title: Rock Yourself to Sleep
Sort of? Damn, girl, you're venturing into some very juicy territory! Bring it on!!!
Date: September 15, 2007 07:45 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
I'm not sure if you should feel honored or not but I have been a LONGTIME reader of fanfic here at MTT and this is the first story I have felt compelled to register just to review !! I am loving the aspect of the camera crew as a real part of Jim & Pam's life, possibly even friends. Also this is the first story I have read that I sympathized with Jim's point of view on being justified for just leaving after CN. Great Job, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Wow. I am honored. Thank you so much for your review and the kind words about this story. You know, I wish they'd do one episode where the camera crew is somehow involved even more than they were in email surveillance. Thanks again for your review. It is so appreciated!
Date: September 14, 2007 11:46 pm Title: What You Get Is Not Quite What You Choose
Oh, Jim. I'm so sad for him right now! We need that happy ending: STAT! :)
Date: September 14, 2007 11:40 pm Title: Muddy River Runs So Deep
OMG. I don't know whether I love you or hate you. I thought we were gonna get that screw up against the wall, but noooooo. Humph!
But, regardless, you had so many great lines in this that I can't fault you for furthering the fight for a while--as long as it's not permanent!
This was harsh, but so good:
“You told me you were going to marry Roy. What was I supposed to do? Walk you down the aisle?”
Excellent chapter. Again! No, please let's move on to the consummation part, hmm? ;)
Author's Response: I honestly wanted wall-sex too. It just didn't happen. Thanks so much for your review and I'll try to get us all to the consummation part ASAP.
Date: September 14, 2007 11:35 pm Title: I've Run Just As Far As I Can Run
Ooh, assertive Jim is fun. :)
Author's Response: Yes he is...and according to Pam...kind of a turn on. Thanks for your review.
Date: September 14, 2007 08:33 pm Title: What You Get Is Not Quite What You Choose
No Jim, it's never too late!! Go for it man. Oh GodInThisChilis you've officially gotten me addicted. Even more so than before. I love this AU version of the events yet it still feels like it could've happened in the show and I can't wait to see what happens! Lovely job.
10 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2007 08:32 pm Title: What You Get Is Not Quite What You Choose
I really love this story. But I just... I dunno. I really hope that Jim stops making all the first moves. I get that he left and all but Pam NEVER came right out and told him she felt the same way so I just don't see why she thinks she has the right to be this angry at him like she ever actually told him. You know? I jsut really want, like in the show, to see PAM put herself out there and actually tell him herself that she can. But if thats not how you're playing this, that's okay. ;) Ill still read!!!
8 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2007 06:02 pm Title: Bloodhounds On Your Mind
"Yeah, Pam…you’re an expert at ‘can’t’ aren’t you? Can’t take a chance…can’t be honest…can’t admit anything…can’t…."
"Jim…let me rephrase that. It’s not that I can’t…it’s that I don’t."
Ouch! Just what these 2 need - a chance to clear the air and lay their cards on the table.
Author's Response: They really do, don't they? As far as we know they've never mentioned it...not even in passing...not even in veiled terms. They must be bursting to talk about it.
8 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2007 05:53 pm Title: Doin’ Time in a Lonesome Prison, Where the Sun Don’t Shine
"Puh-leeze, Halpert. Shrutes are not stupid." Something softens then in Dwight’s face. "…and besides, she’s not the only one you left without saying goodbye to." Aww, poor Dwight. And this was so perfect - "Is there a Chicken Soup for the Rejected’s Soul?"
Author's Response: I love when Dwight is human and has feelings. Thanks so much for your review.
Date: September 14, 2007 04:24 pm Title: What You Get Is Not Quite What You Choose
ahh! this is perfect. i love that jim actually talked about it and with the camera guy. bring on the smut!!
9 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2007 01:20 pm Title: What You Get Is Not Quite What You Choose
Oh wow! I love Jim having a bond with the camera guy and I can't wait to see what he does with this new info :)
Author's Response: Jim needs some more guy friends...doesn't he? I think you'll be happy with what he does with the info.
Date: September 14, 2007 01:11 pm Title: What You Get Is Not Quite What You Choose
Wow -- I like that aspect of digging into the whole presence of the documentary crew.
Jim -- it isn't too late! She just said you never gave her a chance -- now give her that chance! (Multiple times, if you must...)
Author's Response: Pam deserves multiple chances, don't you think? Thanks for your review.
10 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2007 12:59 pm Title: What You Get Is Not Quite What You Choose
You are rocking this.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it.
9 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2007 12:53 pm Title: What You Get Is Not Quite What You Choose
What a great wrinkle! I love this. Post again soon, SOON.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. I'll do my best to post as soon as possible.
Date: September 13, 2007 09:50 pm Title: Muddy River Runs So Deep
“You never gave me a chance.”
Wow what a way to end it! I'm glad Pam stopped the proceedings (well not so glad, but you know)...I think once they get to an understanding, THEN the pushed up against a wall bit won't be so bad ;)
Date: September 13, 2007 04:46 pm Title: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train
loving this so far...it's so sad that they can't say the right things to eachother, I'll tell you one thing, Pam has way more willpower than I would have!
Author's Response: Oh no kidding! Let him have his way with you now and then be angry later, Pam! Thanks for your review.