Date: September 14, 2007 06:34 pm Title: Not Backing Down
Well, I love the premise of this story. And you really have the whole Pam/Jim interaction down quite well, I must say. I can only imagine Jim's expressions as he's reacting to Dwight and similarly to Pam when she bets him to go hunting with Dwight.
I have to admit, I was a little surprised that Jim told Pam about her "company" for the weekend; I sort of figured he'd leave that to the element of surprise. But, you know, either way, Angela & Pam are going to have some quality time together, so that's always good stuff.
I also liked the detail of having the cameramen follow Jim & Dwight -- it totally seems like something like this could happen on an episode. And yes, that cameraman would have drawn the short straw; poor guy. I wonder if the presence of the camera will throw off the whole camoflage thing, though. Like, wouldn't it be a little distracting to them trying to take cover? I think Dwight would make a comment about that.
Anyway, great start so far. Can't wait to see where this goes. I love anything involving Dwight & Jim.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the detailed review, humoring me in my shameless pleading for feedback. :)rnrnI did like the thought of Pam curling up with her chick flick, only to have Angela show up ready to cat party. But I just had the feeling Jim would not have been able to resist getting Pam's reaction to what he had done, plus he might get Pam to back down once he upped the ante. Of course, he should have known better than that....rnrnI really appreciate your feedback-I'm always worried when I venture into humor territory that I am only amusing myself.
Date: September 14, 2007 05:49 pm Title: Not Backing Down
This is going to be a lot of fun. Angela & Pam, too?? I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! Angela/Pam scenes always crack me up on the show, especially when they have those tentative moments of friendship that can dissolve so quickly. I'm glad you're enjoying it-it's been fun to write!
9 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2007 02:05 pm Title: No Deer Harmed in the Writing of this Story
Wow, I can't wait to read what happens on the trip! I agree that Jim would do anything if Pam dared him. I loved how he sicced Angela on Pam, nice payback. I hope we get to see a little of Pam's weekend, too!
Author's Response: Thanks! While Jim would do whatever Pam dared him, he definitely would get his payback. :) And yes, I think a little Pam/Angela time will be shown. (Spoiler!)
Date: September 11, 2007 11:18 am Title: No Deer Harmed in the Writing of this Story
Ok, that is just strange on all fronts. Meaning, completely in character. OMG, I cannot wait for Jim & Pam to realize the other knows about Dwight & Angela. CANNOT. WAIT.
Author's Response: Hehe. Dwangela is nothing if not strange. rnrnI promise to update really soon!
8 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2007 07:34 am Title: No Deer Harmed in the Writing of this Story
Very clever!
Author's Response: Thanks! So far this has been a fun little story to write.
Date: September 10, 2007 11:52 pm Title: No Deer Harmed in the Writing of this Story
you know I wondered what would happen with dwanglea over the hunting issue after wathing the preview....i'm giddy with anticipation.
Author's Response: Thanks! I will try and deliver a new installment here soon to help quench the anticipation....
Date: September 10, 2007 06:03 am Title: The Dare
Only Pam could make Jim go hunting with Dwight.
Also loved how Dwight said Jim wasn't good enough for Pam.
Author's Response: Yep, the things he'll do for love. Though I think deep down he sort of enjoys being around Dwight, in a very weird way. rnrnThanks for reviewing!
Date: September 09, 2007 09:01 pm Title: The Dare
Ha I lovedit. I can just imagine Jimfearing for his life on this trip :)
Author's Response: Thanks! It could definitely be a scary, scary thing going hunting with Dwight.
Date: September 09, 2007 04:41 pm Title: The Dare
I hope this is only the beginning...more?
Author's Response: Yep, there will be more to come....Thanks for reviewing!
Date: September 09, 2007 04:16 pm Title: The Dare
Ok, that Pam is a little nutty. And who in her right mind would send Jim away for the weekend?
Author's Response: Yeah, not sure what got into me here with Pam. I imagine she'll regret this halfway into a chickflick.