Date: January 12, 2008 04:36 am Title: 12:00 PM
I LOVED the format but poor Jim! And EVIL you for leaving us like this! His messages - wow. You are really, really good at writing Jim, Wendy, but COME ON! </Andy> Clock's ticking and I need another update!
8 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2008 04:29 pm Title: 11:00 AM
This is bad, very bad. I want to enjoy this, because you've done such a good job. Jim's thoughts seem so Jim and Pam's reactions are so Pam. And heaven knows its a better solution to Casino Night than "I can't," but I'm TERRIFIED it isn't going to end well, and this chapter did NOT help that fear. I'll continue to anxiously read. Please give it a happy ending!!!
Date: January 11, 2008 02:48 pm Title: 12:00 PM
Awww poor Jim!!! I hope Pam isn't on her way back to Scranton and that instead she's at one of the apartments imagining her life with Jim there and making him sweat it out for the fun of it ....update soon!!!
10 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2008 12:14 pm Title: Prologue
This was perfect. You moved the story forward in more ways than one. An hour passed and even though Jim and Pam weren't together, we learned a lot. Jim got close to confronting what was going on. This is so good!
10 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2008 08:03 am Title: 12:00 PM
Big, BIG Yay--but I'm still hungry...
Date: January 11, 2008 04:47 am Title: 12:00 PM
A big 'ol YAY from me, as you know! I love the range of emotions that Jim goes through with these messages. I can hear the frustration, the trying-to-gloss-everything-over-with-humor, and even the anger in his voice.
Great job, my friend!
Date: January 10, 2008 09:40 pm Title: Prologue
I was so excited to see that you had updated...although I was a little disappointed to not read a nice long jam filled chapter...I can't wait for the next one!!!
Date: January 10, 2008 07:42 pm Title: 12:00 PM
Cool format. I like it a lot. I'm such a fan of this story, and it's a real treat to see that you're updating. I'm beering you lots of strength and energy so you can keep the updates coming as you get back at it at school.
Please say Pam isn't going back to Scranton. *crosses fingers* Bravo, SHWOP!!!! --GMMBBG
8 [Report This]Date: January 10, 2008 06:32 pm Title: 12:00 PM
Really good story, enjoying the whole idea immensely. Disappointed at how short the chapter was though, although the format was smart. Who am I to complain really... KEEP EM' COMING!!!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reading! I know, I was sorry about the chapter length too, but no way of avoiding it unfortunately. Glad you still liked it though! More to come soon!
Date: January 10, 2008 06:18 pm Title: 12:00 PM
Oh sweet Jeebus, Wendy -- ratchet the tension up a few more notches, why dontcha?
I think this level of frantic is exactly how Jim would sound, BTW.
Author's Response: Aww, lisahoo, thank you so much! Frantic!Jim was a lot of fun to write, I won't lie. Less tension will be coming soon (twss) and thanks so much for your consistent reading :)
Date: January 10, 2008 06:11 pm Title: 12:00 PM
I am so glad this story is back!! Hope the next chapter is up soon!!!!!!
Author's Response: I will do my best; there's that pesky school thing getting in the way :) But more to come soon, thanks for reading!
9 [Report This]Date: December 31, 2007 08:22 pm Title: 11:00 AM
this is a brilliant story, and its just hit where we've all wanted it to - and you've left it on a cliff! sign of a good writer if you ask moi!
10 [Report This]Date: December 30, 2007 09:21 am Title: Prologue
Oh my gosh. I love this story. You are doing a wonderful job! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!
Date: December 30, 2007 08:25 am Title: 11:00 AM
Oh, wow. I hadn't read the last chapter somehow so I just caught up on both these two...talk about going from a radiant high to a desperate low. You write the agony so well...but please update soon with some happiness!
Author's Response: I will do my best. Thanks so much for reading! :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 30, 2007 02:23 am Title: 11:00 AM
WHAT?!?!?! Where is she going??? Dang that Pam and her perpetual indecisiveness.
Oh the suspense! Wendy Blue, you kill me :)
But I'll wait patiently for the next installment...hopefully with more blue skies to come :)
Author's Response: Haha, CashBasket, that made me laugh :) Thanks for hangin' in there and I do believe there might be some blue skies on the horizon. Stay tuned!
Date: December 29, 2007 09:45 pm Title: Prologue
WOW! Okay I know I should be angry at you for the all the angst, but I can't lie, this chapter was DELICIOUS! I mean, you could cut the tension with a knife, and I was loving every second of it! I don't know why, but apparently I'm a sucker for angry-fake-couple-Jim-and-Pam :)
My favorite line was the bit where Pam said something like "we met and fell in love in Scranton, but Jim just felt the need to move on to greener pastures..." - I loved the "fell in love" bit and also the fact that Pam is fighting back...good girl!
Great, great chapter! I'm looking forward to seeing how Jim's gonna patch this one up....
Author's Response: So glad to hear it was tasty :) Yeah this one was a toughy but thanks so much for reading! More updates on the way!
Date: December 29, 2007 08:10 pm Title: Prologue
yay! i couldn't find this story because i swore it was called '24 hours' or something, and now i have :)
Author's Response: Ooo, glad you found it! And thanks so much for reading :)
Date: December 29, 2007 07:44 pm Title: 11:00 AM
Uh oh. Looks like Jim overdid his Roy impersonation. The two of them are just so confused and overtired, no wonder they're acting crazy. Can't wait to see where Pam's heading to now. We've still got a lot of daylight left!
Author's Response: A lot of daylight left, indeed! Don't you worry, plenty of time for Jim to grovel :) Thanks so much for reading!
7 [Report This]Date: December 29, 2007 06:46 pm Title: 11:00 AM
Well done, well done. I got the internet to work so I could read it, and it was oh so worth it!! Great job with the tension, and I love Jim's Roy!Act. --CH
Author's Response: Thanks, CH, couldn't have done it without you!
Date: December 29, 2007 06:32 pm Title: 11:00 AM
I so didn't expect that, but I trust you. I know more excitement is ahead, and I can't wait!
Author's Response: Aww, the trust is appreciated :) More to come soon, thanks for reading!
Date: December 29, 2007 05:22 pm Title: 11:00 AM
you made us wait THIS long and this is what we get ?! where is the love ?!?! :P
Author's Response: Haha, love is on the way, I promise! Hang in there and thanks for reading :)
8 [Report This]Date: December 29, 2007 04:36 pm Title: 11:00 AM
Oh crap! Surely that cab isn't going to take her all the way back to Scranton? Isn't there some sort of interstate commerce law where you can't go from CT to PA in a taxi? No? Well, there should be. Please update soon. Seriously. Soon.
Author's Response: Uhh, sure there's a law? I really don't know :) Either way, another update is soon on the way, I can promise you tha. Thanks for reading!
Date: December 29, 2007 04:15 pm Title: 11:00 AM
It does my heart a world of good to see this story back up at the top of the "most recent" page. :) Let's try and make this a habit, shall we?
Oh, Swiff, you already know my thoughts on this, but WOW this is a great chapter. I love how you refuse to pull any sort of punches, and you let Jim go just a little bit too far. It's very real, as is Pam's reaction.
Now then, i second what Lisahoo has suggested: that you update soon so that we find out where that cab is headed! :)
Author's Response: Yes sir! And hey, you know this wouldn't even exist without your tremendous help, so thank you!
Date: December 29, 2007 04:04 pm Title: 11:00 AM
OMG! I thought the last chapter was a cliff-hanger, but this?!? You'd better be well rested, missy. The people need to know where that cab is headed and how quickly Jim can follow it!
Author's Response: Very well-rested, lisahoo, never fear! I'm doing the next chapter in a slightly different format so the update will come much quicker. Thanks so much for stickin' with this!
9 [Report This]Date: December 01, 2007 08:15 am Title: 10:00 AM
ok don't take this the wrong way, but i totally hate you :) this is pure agony! obviously, you are an amazing writer. i wait for the next chapter on pins and needles :)