10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2007 02:40 pm Title: Chapter One
i keep meaning to tell you how much i ADORE this story. You have no idea!
the realism in it is just genius! <3
Author's Response:
Thank you SO much! :D It was just one of those ideas that I couldn't quite put to rest. I'm kind of sad that I didn't write more (because I do think that there's more I could have written...), but meh. Whatever! As long as a couple of people like it (and it's out of my head!), that's all that matters!
Thank you again!!! :)
Date: September 16, 2007 11:16 pm Title: Chapter One
Ha! Actually, I WAS thinking the title meant this fic was based on that poem, and I almost didn't read it. So thanks for explaining! :)
Very sweet and introspective fic. I love what Pam does at the end. So cute.
Author's Response:
Ha! I don't even know how the phrase popped in my head, I don't think that I've even read the poem in 5-6 years!!
I'm very glad that you enjoyed it, and thanks for the review. :)
Date: September 16, 2007 11:35 am Title: Chapter One
Last month, the phrase had meant, “Meet me in the supply closet in the next ten minutes” since somehow she had been the one to keep the condoms in her desk
Ha. Thsoe two. Can I just say I love the Pam you have written here? It totally would make sense she'd be freaked out to get a key sans explanation from Jim. And about teh whole past with Roy and getting bored. It fits! Great insight there! And I can see Jim being (obviously) upset at the end but then Pam dangling the key. Ah. So good. You pretty much rock at life :)
And athough I was sad it wasn't a Computers update.... I love it just the same!
She loved the nights that he came over to her apartment and let her lay between his legs as they sat on the sofa and watched a movie. He would wrap his arms around her waist
Too bad this show is on NBC. Such a great moment there. *sigh*
Lovely job!
PS Any warning e-mails my way soon? *hint hint* Haha no pressure tho :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :) I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I know I probably could have written the chapter in more detail, but the way that I've been writing things lately, I'll start them and then lose my train of thought and never finish them. So I made this as simple as possible and hoped for the best.
I'm still working my way through the next chapter of Computers, though I'm getting close. Every little push that I get from someone pushes me a little further. I really am almost done, but I'm at a point that requires a lot of insight and unfortunately, I keep getting sidetracked (and I want this chapter to rock. :) Soon! Soon! I'll go work on it right now, haha.