Date: July 17, 2008 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
“I literally said, I have to go home and watch America’s Next Top Model with my girlfriend.”
Awesome.
I want one. Sigh.
Author's Response: yayyyy! thanks for the review :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2007 09:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Too adorable. Glad to know even fictional characters have embarassing vices!
Author's Response: they sure do! and i bet there's more up my sleeve ;) thanks for the feedback.
Date: September 19, 2007 07:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Fierce! I can't stop watching the reruns of ANTM on MTV/VH1...What does it say about me when the first thing that came to mind when reading the title of your story was ANTM and not something dirty?
Very sweet!
Author's Response: i think all it says about you is that i succeeded in my stolen bad double entendre. thanks for your feedback!
Date: September 19, 2007 04:20 am Title: Chapter 1
That was so sweet, it made my teeth ache! Seriously though, great job capturing the essence of JAM. They're just so darn cute!
Author's Response: a toothache does NOT sound good - but i appreciate your feedback. yes it was sweet and cute - i'm glad you enjoyed.
Date: September 18, 2007 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE EVERYTHING THIS CHOOSES TO BE! Ok...I actually had Jim and Pam watch ANTM in one of my chapters too!!! Great minds...teehee. And you just created a monster with the "horri-amazing..." I'm totally going to be saying that! This is just awesome!
Author's Response: First of all - you win best feedback of the year! Thank you, thank you :) Actually, the "horri-amazing" is really "horri...mazing." But I hope that the point got across well.
8 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2007 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
AWE-SOME!
Date: September 18, 2007 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
You have their voices perfectly - I could easily imagine them having this convo. So funny. These two lines especially made me laugh:
“I literally said, I have to go home and watch America’s Next Top Model with my girlfriend.” And: “No, she hasn’t started preaching,” she replied, eyes glued to the TV.
Just very sweet, very them and totally delightful.
Author's Response: oh, thank you! being "them" is so hard, and i appreciate that.
Date: September 18, 2007 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL! I don't know what the deal is with that show, but I love it when fic writers make the characters watch stupid stuff like that. So cute!
Author's Response: well i highly suggest watching ANTM - it is a trainwreck that should not be missed.
Date: September 18, 2007 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahhh! ANTM is definitely one of my guilty pleasures, so I love that it's also one of Jim and Pam's! So freaking cute. I loved how he said he had to leave the meeting to go watch the show with his girlfriend. That's love!
Author's Response: that IS love - thanks for the review!